All Comments on 'Nicole Desired Ch. 20'

I have really enjoyed reading this story, although it contains quite graphic BDSM there is so much love in this story that it brings a fantastic balance. Every character is richly developed and I loved all the ladies of the estate. Please keep writing you definitely have skill and thank you for this wonderful story. xxx

hmm what happened to Wendy & craig ?

The story explains that Craig was turned over to Carmen to be trained as a chastised sissy servant. While Wendy was traded to Alex Warbler for Susan's freedom. This is explained in in chapter 19.

This was a good story. I hope you continue your writing. Also, regarding the "finally" comment: Maybe you need to learn to read without moving your lips.

Loved the story. Could not stop reading it from chapter 1. Keep up the excellent work.

That was an absolutely great story. Now, any chance for a story about the academy that had just started?

I have thought about it but have not yet taken the time to plot out the track of the story line and the various aspects that I would like to see develop through the story's progression.

Thank you for this wonderful story. I hope you will write more. I have to admit I cried reading about the wedding.

Great story I couldn't stop reading it. I would love to see more keep up the good work.

Nicole,

Wow, this story was amazing. If it is in any part autobiographical, I am so sad at what you had to endure at the hands of Wendy, Megan and Craig, but am delighted that you are VERY happy now. I agree with some people that the "academy" would be an excellent story since you recently introduced new characters, Sandy and Maria.

If indeed, this story was autobiographical, it would be great to see you develop the story after you return from your honeymoon with Linda and enjoy your new home and playroom.

I understand you may not be on lit anymore, but this story desperately needs to continue some way! Atleast tell us what happens on the honeymoon! This has been a heart grabbing ride for me(as you may know if you look at the comments of your other stories. ) I was somewhat saddened when you wrote that Nicole's genitals would be useless because I thought she was about to become an eunch(?) ,and then you turned around and made a horrible event have the most happy of endings!

darryll 's parents need to come back and haunt everyone one of those sadistic idiots

I have contemplated continuing the adventures of Nicole, Linda and the women of the estate. I am interested in writing a followup story based around the newly set up academy. However, it will have to wait for awhile as I have been working on another story that takes up most of my spare time.

Enjoyed the story line the worst part was when Nicole was being tortcherd by Wendy & Friends it wass great to see Nicole and Linda at the end.

I loved the whole story and it was great to see Nicole finally become truly happy and to see the two that had hurt her so bad pay for what they did.

This is the best story that I have read in the last ten years. Good work and taste to every event in each chapter. Congratulations.

I've loved reading this series of stories,I've enjoyed every moment, just wish I could find a place like this, i would be very happy to go there and be trained, fabulous xxxx

Loved every second of it.

Loved every word, great story!

As someone who was born intersexed and decided to transition, I wished I had a loving family like this. I literally cried for half the book. This needs to be published!!!

I was warned to the very core!!!! Please write a sequel, just a short one. I'd love to hear about the honeymoon and possibly children in the future!! With love.... Leah

Just wanted to thank you for the nice story. Thank you