All Comments on 'Falling For The Teacher'

Pretty good story but you need an editor to get it right. I am assuming you do not speak English as a first language which would explain some of the errors. Just use an editor and flesh out your stories more, give them more detail.

Your grammar sucks, but not a bad story.

Beautiful story. Keep writing!

Jake should have a bit of chest hair for that muscular, sexy, hard chest. Something for Rafhel to play with when she takes his shirt off!