All Comments on 'In the Middle of the Night'

I loved the way you built the suspense in the story. The passion was great.

A new version of an old favorite.

Great job as always!

Red always arouses me!

more please

great story had me hard from beginning to end

Crazzzy But loved it, had to control the urge to cum till the end.

Well done Red. I liked it.

what happens next???

Daughter Marie has very ingenuously played "trick AND treat" on her father. Her timing, entry into the house and her parents bedroom was very skillfully engineered and carried out!!! And of course her exit after she seduced and carnally, incestually fucked her father had to also be considered into her mission of consummating sex with her Daddy!

Great writing accomplishment and ideally constructed. Like the opinion of several readers this story does have a familiarity that I've read it before, elsewhere!!

more please

Well done.

MORE!!!