All Comments on 'An Expat Story Ch. 01'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
Good for you

It takes an expat to explain to us the slutty side of Indian Women and the wimpiness of Indian Men.All the while Indian writers have been in self denial over their fetish"cuckoldry"

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
Well done

The last commenter is an idiot. Anyone who makes such sweeping generalizations is in fantasy land. That aside, good story for the most part. It would be better to put more details into the sex scenes. Sounds, teeth, lips, tongue, wet, That stuff. how was the girl dressed? Hair up or down? details so we can imagine it.

Good story

exquisitelifetimeexquisitelifetimeover 11 years ago
great story

well done - well written and nothing but a realistic view of what might happen. nothing too bizzare. dont worry about the hate filled comments.

BandraBandraover 11 years ago
Good story!

Well written and I encourage you to write more.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
not bad but

Lying down not laying down

Gotton laid.

These lndicate an american author for americans cannot get their verbs right.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

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