by double_entendre
More of a flash story! The characters stayed true!
Could have been longer and fleshed out more but was not really necessary just more of
my preference!
Well written good job. Please keep up the writing and posting!
Thank you for your work
He is not quite the hard ass he plays to be -
But he had his pride too lol
No, he didn't forgive her, but he was there and made sure she didn't die alone. The hard ass turned softy. He would never admit it, however, but it helped him earn a few points with God. You did good tough guy.
Thought this was very well done! Hero covering for friend that he knew would get a scholly was a bit of a far reach BUT the example of over betrayed people taking it out on those that they can was OUTSTANDING!
Wounded people wound others!
He lies to protect someone he really doesn't care for and she canes him badly. Then the school nurse wants to report her for abuse and the Principal won't allow it? First question - the Principal has no say and is not the Nurse required by law to report the abuse? Or lose her license? Second question - where were his parents? If she beat him that badly surely his parents would have filed charges against her and the school. Third question - If he hates her that much and holds a grudge that long why would he even consider having sex with her? Fourthly, considering his hatred for her why would he go to her bedside when she was dying? There are just too many things happening in this story that don't add up. And in the end, he doesn't tell her that he doesn't forgive her until after she has passed away, making his statement superfluous . This whole thing just didn't add up to a decent story.
Some school boy with issues? You do realize this is a porn site, correct? 1 star.
Principal Denials
What a perfect name for a bureaucrat.
I am the same as Derek, there are things which have occurred during my lifetime that I will never forgive. Thus is a 5 star! I was near the top of my graduating high school class and I was doing nothing wrong when one of the idiot gym teachers reported me to the vice principal. For some reason this ass gym teacher didn't like geeks like me. He was just another bullying sports jock. I enjoy pissing on his grave 40 years later, lol!
Are not just on the body. I was molested by my step sister when I was 13, no one believed it as I was "a boy that exaggerated". To this day I bear that scar and wonder how much I sabotage my own friendships and relationships out of fear of being hurt again. Years of therapy were simply band-aids.
But just as an aside, WTF does who I voted for affect how I may or may not under-
stand this story? I do agree with another comment, that there are certain things that have happened to me, that have been put upon me, that will never ever EVER be forgiven. Some things hurt so badly that they wound your soul, and when that hap-
pens the scar can be so hard and so deep that even the discussion of forgiveness only makes the scar, and the pain, burn hotter. Great Story, 5 Stars.
is hard to release under any circumstance, TK U MLJ LV NV
Bet it burns knowing those low IQ won the election for Trump.
Funny, I have 145 IQ, 99th percentile in PSAT, NEDT, ACT
valedictorian, pres National Honor Society, vp band, pres Science Club, editor-in-chief literary magazine, yearbook staff, .535 batting average Legion baseball, national Elks
Most Valuable student, after school job, dated prettiest girl in Junior class my senior year, went to Catholic high school where Christian Brothers allowed corporal punishment and would rather vote for Donald than a female who for years actively enabled a serial sexual predator.
Got called brownnose suckhole teacher's pet, fag and I was shortest and skinniest boy in my class, but I got 110lb weight set freshman Christamas...every day for four years lifted...ended freshman year 98lbs and black hornrims-graduated 133lbs....but I did not back down or run from jocks or bullies...deceptively strong I outlifted all senior linemen on football team...taught self to wrestle and would take bully to ground and twist head til he whimpered.
Just because some idiots called me names or in-crowd looked down on me I never cried little baby tears and scurried away like you did.
Just laughed at the line of jocks sniffing round my girl and knowing how quickly naked she got every weekend night in my parent's car.
I howled in mirth when rich elitist key clubbers and in college fangs and spurs also insulted me...
One more thing, your hero Slick Willie - Arkansas democrats named him that-not because of state monica left his dick or cigar-tied himself to the oh so enchanting hilly then repeatedly preyed on local county fair queens while Donald had one beautiful wife after another...as he got older they got hotter
Did you really want billy running naked after white house maids while hillary used old cigars she found in oval office
OFFAL WHILE BILLY WAS THERE
The five pointy things I gave this story, was just in case the author ran out of hair shirts to wear! I think the sex that was explored was more than a little gross given the background, but the ending did show some character.
there like a theometer degreesee, comfert is relative. LOVE slap hapy papy #9
1 star - two fucked up people do not necessarily make for a good story.
I really hate the beating part of it - the bitch should have been put in jail for child abuse - like they would now.