All Comments on 'Monica Meets a Cumslut'

by BuckyDuckman

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RyeandGingerAyleRyeandGingerAylealmost 12 years ago
Wow!!!

Well, Bucky, that might be pure fiction, but you're describing something close to the relationship I had with my third wife, except that she was on board the entire way.

Great piece of writing...scalding hot.

Sandhills50Sandhills50almost 12 years ago
You're sick, twisted & perverted......

and I like that in a person!! };->.... What a story!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago
amazing story.....

i could not stop reading please right another chapter!!!

darcysweetdarcysweetalmost 12 years ago
Oh the hotness

Clever, compelling, honest and oh so deliciously dirty. Thanks.

FatBottomedGirlFatBottomedGirlalmost 12 years ago
smoking!

Ridiculously HOTT. Thank you:-)

Mike BlackMike Blackover 11 years ago
Hot, but not just hot

...that was a damn good piece of writing (and hot as hell).

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago

A creampie lover's delight!

frictionfacefrictionfaceover 11 years ago
Delicious!

Enjoyed the writing - I really wanted to believe it was a true story

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago

Wow, that was a great piece of writing. I was just looking for something to read while I JO, but I came after the first page. Usually I'd be done after that but I couldn't help but continue until I finished the story.

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
Fucking awesome

This is honestly a really good story and super hot and maybe you should workshop it and try to submit it to an erotica journal?

rick_ohrick_ohover 11 years ago
Excellent

Good story, good writing, good plan.

Omega ManOmega Manover 11 years ago
Wonderful

That was a wonderful read ... thanks for composing it

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
Thanks!

... for sharing this excellent story, which I found erotic, intimate, and insightful as to th e emotions of a loving "willing cuckold" situation like this.

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
Perfection

This story has so many things in common with my relationship with my husband. It turns me on and fills me with a warm happiness all at the same time. Thank you so much for writing this out- I will reread this one for ages.

theothermrtheothermrover 11 years ago
Wow

That was not only very well written, it was hotter that hot! Another one of your stories into my favourites

levoyeur2levoyeur2over 11 years ago
Fantastic Story

This is a great story. Erotic and dirty and almost a how to for guys to get someone out of their league. Thanks!

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
Incredible

This is an incredibly well written story. The pace is so fast and it really really drags you in. I came so hard at the end, but a little bit of me didn't want the story to end.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago

this story was really hot, really filthy, and...cute, honestly. and it couldn't be as good if it weren't so romantic.excellent work.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
WOW!

This is such a well written story! It drew me in and kept me wanting for more!! It parallels a lot of my own feelings. Now I must find more of your stories to read...

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago
Hot!

This was one of the best written, hottest stories I have ever read. Incredible! Thanks for writing and sharing this story with us.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago
Incredible

this got me off like never before, the build up in the kitchen was so well-written, and the final sex scene tipped me over. Great job

newpiegirlnewpiegirlalmost 11 years ago
Oh Man!

I love this story! Is there a part 2?

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago
Brilliant

Totally not my thing, and yet so damned compelling!

Nice Fucking Writing.

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
Hot

Like what Pam and Jim were doing behind closed doors.

ShelleysGirlShelleysGirlabout 10 years ago
Great story

Loved the writing. You hit my fantasy spot on.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 10 years ago
Enjoyment

I am so pleased with this story - it's unusual, it's delightful in its twists and turns. AND it's well organized well told and the characters are almost real .

Thank you

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago

Although not one of my (many) kinks I agree with the other reviews. Extremely well done and made me horny as hell. Thank you.

asianToyasianToyover 9 years ago
Fantastically well written

Praise sound flat a lot of the time but, risking that, I need to say how well crafted this story is. The characters are so well fleshed out and the interplay between them so real it rivals the best on this site.

I just hope mine can improve to this level someday.

Thanks!

asianToy

PS the kink doesn't do it for me but that just shows how good the story is!!

AMoveableBeastAMoveableBeastover 9 years ago

This is a wonderful story. Even as deep in my wheelhouse as it is, and it is deep, deep in there, I could appreciate the writing over my own kink. It's spartan but fully-formed, lively and never slow, but also well described. Sexy and intimate but also raw and honest. Very well done, Bucky.

patientleepatientleeover 9 years ago
I love your style, Bucky.

I think it's the short, quirky sentences. This was squicky for me to read, but for all the fetishy sex, it was a fun, complete story with a satisfying ending.

lovingeatingitalllovingeatingitallabout 9 years ago
Delightfully deliciuous tale,

Wishing I was your character in the story. Hoping for a sequel,,,, Does Monica do a group?,,,,She would be soooooooooooo delicious,,, my mouth is watering,,

asianToyasianToyalmost 9 years ago
My Second Read

Just as goôd as the first! You do kink really well'. Wish I could write dirty as well.

Guys: you need to do this. If your girl has any spunk at all (yes, I see the double entendre) then do this for her.

asianToy

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
another great one

I'm coming to really appreciate your excellent work. you are so good at showing the person behind the actions. I have not read all your work, please keep them coming so I still have more to discover.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago
You are a very good writer.

I greatly enjoy your writing. Sometimes I forget that I am supposed to be jerking off while reading what you have written, I am being drawn along with the characters and the story development; Then I come back to my senses and remember what brought me here in the first place. I hope to read your 'real' book someday.

StubbyoneStubbyoneover 6 years ago
Hotter than hot !

Incredibly hot ! I've always wished I could lick my wife's pussy after another man filled her with warm cum. I think the both of us would come at about the same time.

I have no problem eating my own cumshot out of a woman. If my wife thinks he's ok to fuck and take a load bareback, I'd defer to her judgement and lick up as much of his cum as would dribble out of her dripping gash. Great story. Turned me right the f@#k on. Thanks.

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Hot

Wow, I was hoping Monica would have let Gary’s friends fuck her too. Maybe return with her body covered I dried/drying cum.

But you finished it perfectly.

Best tasting pussy you can find.

I love to eat my wife after I cum in her. At first Curly was grossed out. But I learned to enjoy hot juicy dripping wet sweet creamy freshly fucked cum filled pussy as a teenager (another story). The first time I did it to Curly was out of lust because I was still hot for sex after I came in her, and she needed to get off, and I wanted it. After a few more times she got to like it. Eating my semen from her pussy has become a favorite way to continue or sexual romp. I actually look forward to eating the mixture of my cum and her pussy nectar. And now Curly not only loves how kinky and arousing it is, she gets off on it like crazy, her orgasms are incredible, and sometimes she’ll squirt. Curly actually expects me to clean up her creampie now, every time we fuck. She’ll straddle my face if I don’t get down there in a timely manner. She likes to fuck more now too, actually I think she always did.

I try to take any opportunity to fuck her, no matter where we are, even in public places, like clubs or dressing rooms in shopping malls. Then I’ll eat her hot dripping creampie as soon as possible, so she doesn’t leak down her thighs and get embarrassed. Sometimes I don’t though, just to tease her and drive her crazy. The thought that someone might see my semen dripping down her legs turns me on, and them looking at and ogling her like she’s a slut makes it even hotter. I believe it makes her more horny too that other men might want her. She told me she likes the idea that some times people may look at her like she’s a slut, depending on the circumstances. It excites her, makes her wet and want to fuck more.

Early on she never would let me cum in her mouth after I finally got her to suck my cock. Then one time I kissed her passionately after eating my creampie and licking her clean. She resisted for a moment, then gave into it. Early the next morning I awoke with my cock in her mouth. She sucked me off taking every spurt of cum into her mouth. Then she moved up and kissed me. She hadn’t swallowed. We shared my semen in a hot snowball I’ll never forget. She now licks my cock clean after I cum inside her. She won’t admit it but I’ll bet she likes the taste of her pussy.

I’d love to watch her eat a creampie or even just pussy, and I don’t care who the stud is that fills the pussy with his thick hot semen.

I also fantasize about Curly getting fucked by a younger man. I want her to find a young hung stud, maybe half her age, and fuck him. I want her to enjoy that pleasure. I want her to come to me freshly fucked. Then straddle my face and lower her wet swollen lips to mine and order me to lick every one of his little sperm from her pussy, as she tells me about her stud and every thing they did with each other.

I think I might even want to watch. But maybe not the first time she takes a lover. Probably after she gets to wanting it more to the point that she becomes a slut for other cock and cum.

Then she’ll be less likely to be nervous about me watching.

I have suggested it. Curly says she would never cheat on me. I’ve explained if I want her to do it, then it’s not cheating. She says she wouldn’t feel right about it. I tell her she’ll love it.

But Curly has never said no, and she’s never said never! My hopes are alive.

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Write more

You should write more. It was sexy as hell and descriptive i liked it

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
I MUST do this with my wife

You made me realize how much I want to go down on my wife right after we fuck. I love the flavors of sex and this has got to be the ultimate oral experience. I don’t know if she’ll freak out but she’s not going to leave me, so why not go for it? Perhaps, I’ll write my own story about how it went. Thanks for the motivation to GO FOR IT.

jsch1947jsch1947about 5 years ago
Very Hot

Nice Story, Well written

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 5 years ago
Great story

One of the best stories I've read!

FluidswallowerFluidswallowerover 4 years ago
Again

Yes, again and again I'll be reading your delicious work of art! I love eating a pussy after I fill it with cum and kissing my lover after she's sucked my cum from me.As in your story, she finds that she loves it too. This for real...... ;-)

Floridaman2020Floridaman2020over 3 years ago

Great story. Love your writing!

lingerielover68lingerielover68about 3 years ago

I read stories from most categories and I have to say that this has to be my favorite!! You have a lot of great reads, but this one out did them all.

awyldsideawyldsidealmost 3 years ago

Great and juicy story. No hang ups just great Sex

awyldsideawyldsidealmost 3 years ago

He went through a lot for her. Now she will soon find someone else to fuck to bring home the creampie

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

Awesome....one lucky guy he has his pie and eats it too.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

O loved it. Good hot sex and real, well developed characters.

Paul7777Paul7777almost 3 years ago

Original, funny, erotic, so easy to read and get excited by, great work

scottc543scottc543almost 3 years ago

This is one of the best hot stories I've ever read. You're a fantastic writer and your fantasies and mine seem to run along the same lines. Please keep writing and sharing your awesome talent with us.

BJwriter2BJwriter2over 2 years ago

I loved this, the way he fucks and then goes down on Monica makes it doubly hot, and then they share a wet, slimy kiss. I love the way you weave in those short snippets of conversation. Awesome!

dirtyoldbimandirtyoldbimanabout 2 years ago

very good. too bad she will never be his long term, she is too shallow.

ScottishTexanScottishTexanabout 2 years ago

I don't normally post my comments anonymously. But I am compelled to do so for this particular story. I don’t consider myself bisexual. But that doesn't mean that I wouldn’t suck on another guy's dick or swallow his cum. The qualification is that I would only do it for a girl who really and truly loves me. Making her happy makes me happy. And just like the Protagonist of this story, she would have to convince me that I totally owned her body and soul. I would have let my ex sleep around with almost any other guy that she wanted to on two conditions. First, she would have needed to let me give her my approval first. I wouldn't have let her fuck just anyone. In the event that she was overcome with passion in the heat of the moment, then immediate and full disclosure at the earliest possible opportunity was absolutely necessary. The second was that she had to make sure that I was ALWAYS number one in her life and would always come home to me, just like Monica in this story.

One motivation for me is that my ex wife is a confirmed bisexual. She always shared me with her girlfriends. So thinking back on it, I would never have been open to letting her fuck another guy had she been straight. She didn't want me to be bisexual and I still believe that two guys sucking dick actually was a turnoff for her. But in a moment of passion when I had made her cum about 6 or 8 times, we finished simultaneously. I was so overwhelmed by the moment that all I could think about was how badly I wanted to eat her some more, so after I pulled out I did. I totally rocked her world by eating her after she had just been fucked. She came explosively twice more screaming her lungs out.

Afterwards we talked. She wasn't turned on by me eating my own cum at all and expected me to by bothered by tasting myself. I told her that I wasn't bothered by it because it was the postcoital fluids from both of us combined. Anytime we made love and I took a break before finishing, there was always a wet spot on the fitted sheet that was purely all from her. During our loving, she would produce as much cum as I would eventually add at the finish. She admitted to being extremely turned on by getting oral after being fucked because it was dirty plus her erogenous zones were all sensitive making it easy for her to have more orgasms. I did it for her several more times but once the novelty wore off, she didn't want me to do it any more.

If I ever get a new bisexual girlfriend and she shares me like my ex wife did, and she wants me to suck another guy and eat his semen, I would be happy to do it for her. But I'm not bisexual because I have no interest in dating another guy and I'm not attracted to other guys. Would I eat her pussy after she gets fucked by another guy? Absolutely. I'm a little excited by the taboo, but it's mostly about rocking her world and blowing her mind.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

i gave it a 5. but only because there isn't a 6

gunmakergunmakerover 1 year ago

Very good. Thank You!

Oscarmeyer50Oscarmeyer506 months ago

Great story and well told. I love to cum kiss my girlfriend.

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