All Comments on 'Just Say No'

the outcome was so predictable, that it would be dean.

writing was good tho

I actually got really scared! I thought it wasnt Dean, but I was soo happy it was.

It was perfect! I like a good non-consent/reluctance story. But this was even better than most! A rape fantasy is just that. A fantasy. Instead of enjoying the rape we get to see her fear and her realization that she didn't want to be raped. It was a whole different ball game when it was her boyfriend who she trusted and another when she thought it was a stranger and actual rape. Rape is never fun or enjoyable, its not sexy or pleasurable. I enjoyed the story because it shows a more honest truth than a girl who gets raped and likes it. Very good story, keep up the good work! :D

Well, if you are considered perverted, then I'm next in line. I loved this story. So vivid, clear, and well written. You have acquired a new reader. I look forward to reading all of your stories. Loved this.

She didn't know it was his voice? His smell? His cock?

Great writing, unbelievable story...

Nice story, liked the bit about her being his cum-dumpster. Personally I think ravishment roleplay works better when the lady is in on it more. Like all sub/dom stuff a good part of the sexy for the aggressor is that he gets to do what he likes, but she loves it and agrees to it and if she REALLY wanted it to stop could make it stop. But other people have different likes I suppose, and it's just a story.

This is so sweet

I'm a bit disappointed tho how easy it was for her boyfriend to hit her

He did exactly what she asked him to do. Not exactly polite of him to not tell her it was him, but he was making a point. Or, at least, I assume he was, since that's probably what I'd be doing in that situation ... though I must admit I'd have talked it out with her when the request was made rather than getting all pissy and running off in a snit, so maybe I shouldn't imagine that he's doing what I would do. His initial reaction was pretty childish, when you think about it, but that's a failing of the character, not the author. Good work.