All Comments on 'Oxygen'

Even without the graphic sex...it was so well done it brought tears to my eyes. Brilliant!!

I hope this was fiction because it was very powerful. Well done...more please...maybe something different.

I sincerely hope that this is a work of fiction honey, and if not, then you have my well wishes. I too have had the unfortunate experience of cancer, which is thankfully a thing of the past. I can therefore relate wholeheartedly to your story, which is detailed and incredibly well written, thank you. And yes, my tears did flow.

Be kind to yourself and find your inner peace, if it's required

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Keep posting!

Just beautiful.

Aww... This was a powerful story, and I too hope this is fiction. If not, I hope you get through it and overcome the obstacles in front of you.

Real and moving. Well-written, no wasted words, strong mechanically and emotionally. More!

The big C has affected me too,& I appreciate the difficulty writing about such a difficult subject,I also hope that it is fiction & not based on fact/real life experience.Very well done

This is a lovely story ... and like so many of the others have said, I pray this is fiction. But you can tell they are so in love. ~ L

Well done

This story was incredibly sweet. I am so happy I took the time to read it. :)

This piece was emotionally driven from deep within the writers heart. I honestly felt my own heart break when she was describing her dilemma sitting in her car outside the Drs. Office. I truly hope and pray this is a work of fiction and not real. 🌹 12dozen

5🌟's Beautifully written.

Beautiful.

It's been my experience that most one-pagers on this site aren't very good. But this story... it's just marvellous. In that one short page you've illustrated all human fears and hopes, and so well. I'm another cancer survivor---if this story is fact, then good luck and try hard to be optimistic because it sure beats the hell out of letting this disease drive you down.

If you do have disease, I hope you get around the pagan thing and realize a Savior is at your side. No darkness no bargain no seduction. Just accept Him. As you are. He understands. Live your life plan and go to His arms when you're called Home.

There is a hell and it's far more horrible than anybody imagines. Regret, anger, sadness, no oxygen, only monsters and hate. 7 levels of suffering.

I'm here and I'm a sinner like everybody else. Maybe I'm here today for you.

Forgiveness is waiting for you. A Love you can't imagine. Peace. He suffered and died for you. No matter who you are or what you do, accept Him.

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Hi everyone, thank you so much for the comments! I don't have cancer, but my mom did, and I was inspired to write this because I was wondering how I would feel if I did. Fortunately, I do have a loving support group around me, so I would be okay... just as fictional Janine will be okay :)

An outstanding "one pager"!!

So much raw emotion in that one page.

Well done.