All Comments on 'Revenge of a Scientist Ch. 01'

by Bunny19

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago
Good start

I liked the first part of the story, but the second half seemed not as well thought out. There are many good possibilities. I look forward to reading how this develops. Don't take short cut.

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago

Yes, I agree. Don't stop writting though, thanks for the story.

qexiqexqexiqexover 9 years ago
Love this story!

Enjoyed this very much, especially the first part. Would love to read more from you.

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Naughty Fantasy

With a very submissive girl. Waiting for the background to this little chapter and the characters within. You have a nicely slutty girl here and she seems more then ready for what she is going to get.

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
PLEASE UPDATE!

I wanna know what happens next. ;)

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