All Comments on 'Talla's Fallen Temple Ch. 07'

These chapters finish too damn fast!

Wonder series, read the 1st one and hooked on this one .. Waiting for (a longer?!) Chapter 8! :)

I don't blame the girls for being angry to learn that their natural course of development had been stopped until they were 18. The Temple elders now control the development of their bodies into their fully mature form, and it takes most of their lives to accomplish it! Their must be a slight amount of natural growth occurring now that they don't take the herbs daily, which accounts for Zoe's 'half upgrade' appearance.

Looking forward to the next chapter, as always

A long summer hiatus while I had some other things to take care of, but I am still intent on finishing this story.

Sorry for the delay.

Specifically, a lot of the punctuation. Especially the question marks.

I dunno why, but it is.

You're right ... they're missing.

I'll have to figure out why that is. I have a python script that formats the text for Literotica. Either it or this site must be removing the question marks. I'll make sure it doesn't happen for Chap 13.

Thanks,

Xavier.