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Bachelor Party Paranoia

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by Anonymous

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by shadowjack1712/14/12

Ever notice?

Sure does seem like a common theme that negative comments are either from established authors who have legitimate constructive comments to make or are from this "Anonymous" person. I'd like to meet ol' Anonymous and see why she/he/whatever has such anger issues or are reading and venting on someone else's efforts. The majority of writers in ANY genre of Lit really really really need competent editors and spell check programs, so the few who are pretty good really stand out. So, Mrs. Star/AlleyKat, a couple of comments: First, You're doing fine. Don't quit because Anonymous is a poorly adjusted human being. Second, do try to convert hubby the the true religion someday--turn it on, wind it up, blow it out: GTO. Yeah, yeah, I know. Mustangs are still around and GTO is not. That only proves the coming zombie apocalypse is nearer than we thought.

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by Anonymous02/07/13

Laughed Out Loud

At that last paragraph........and I never do!

Your fella knows he is loved and where the line is..... good on you

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by FD4502/28/13

Breaks my heart

That a nice good Ohio girl could lower herself to go 'up there'.

Sad really.

However, if it HAD to be 'one of them', I guess it is acceptable that you went with the Stang.

I can understand why he forgave you for being an Ohio girl (have you SEEN Michigan girls???). What is really gobsmacking to me is that he forgave you for driving a KIA!

Congratulations on your wedding. Being a step mom is hard work. I'm sure you'll do fine.

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by Anonymous02/28/13

good girl

thanks for making them pay. should have gotten all her hair. THANK YOU

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by kalharri03/06/13

congrats

congrats to the both of you as well. :)

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by Anonymous04/08/13

Who's getting married?

You're going to jail for assault and battery! Dumbass! You acted like so many of the outraged men in the LW section that felt they were being used, abused or humiliated. And you do realize that this is a porn site and not Reader's Digest? As it turns out, few people vote on stories and even fewer comment. Those of us that do comment seem to be a divergent, volatile group. Not too many middle-of-the-road comments being made. So, as with all stories, some will like it, some will hate it and the rest will move onto the next story without voting or commenting. Welcome to Literotica! P.S. That writer you said isn't having a bachelor party? Wait until his next story - the strippers and hookers at his party were off the hook!

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by Anonymous08/29/13

To the brilliant critic, who wrote the comment "Who's getting married?"

Duh, the part where she went and pounded on the stripper was FICTION, You... Absolute... Moron...!!! AlleyKat spelt that out as plain as day for the slower dickwads like you.

And guess what? She GOT married.

I am glad she, and the author she referred to, found each other. They deserve each other... a little bit of joy, peace, happiness and trust in a world knee-deep in selfishness, shallowness and betrayal.

It's a pity she, and others who grace us with their efforts, have to put up with dumbasses who, first off, can't seem to separate reality from fiction, and second, don't mind making negative comments when you contribute nothing yourself.

As the saying goes, who held the shotgun to your head and made you read it?

And do me a favour, learn how to use paragraphs.

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by Rogn12310/14/13

I knew whe she said

.They drove mustangs that they would be clueless cucks and just wait for followup stories about them catching each other cheating and each being totally taken by surprise at the discovery. Every story on this site that makes a point about what type car a person drives, always has the dumb cuck driving a mustang.

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by gatorhermit03/29/14

Funny little story - could have been in humor

Wishing you all lots of happiness and good times.

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by Drbeamer333308/10/14

Enjoyed it

A fun read. Thanks.

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by Anonymous12/16/14

Me Too

He is one of my favorites also, and hope you two are happy forever .

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