All Comments on 'Master of Fire'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
Good chapter

Please keep them coming !!

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
Don't let it be the last!

This was without a doubt, delicious! Do keep writing!

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago

Please do not keep us waiting....write more.

ravenescentravenescentover 11 years ago
More...

It's nice to see actual forced sex rather than the usual "she was secretly loving it" stories here. Please continue.

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
More Please!

That was awesome! Pleeeeeeese continue!

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
Great story.

Keep going.

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
One of the best!

Outstanding work, keep it up.

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago

It is nice to see a non-con story that isn't one where the female secretly loves it. Though I have a feeling, like every story on Literotica, this will turn into just that and probably even into some silly happily ever after love story.

The story thus far is good, though you do need to work a bit on plot and character development.

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