All Comments on 'Total Woman Industries 04'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
Deserves

This story deserves more than the paltry five stars that I happily award it. I so enjoyed reading about the young and desperate Greta auditioning with everyone but the janitor for the part.

The producer taking her home and sexing her throughout the night was the erotic highlight of this story and the series so far. Those two skillfully written sentences had me imagining all types of erotic activity between the sex crazed producer and his young ingenue.

Please continue to write about young beauties such as Greta using their bodies to please men they would otherwise never even speak to. Once again, my gratitude for sharing your talent.

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