I KNEW IT!!!
Not what I'd want to hear if I was a small, young human male.
CAN U PLZ MAKE THE NEXT CH A TWO OR THREE PAGES PLZZ?
This is where you leave the story. You are an evil genious my friend, with a double shot of evil. Please update again soon.
I waited and waited and waited and you left it like that!!! You Sir are Evil Lol!!! I kinda figured that he was knocked up but it was kinda evil to leave us hanging!!! I knew I loved your writing for a reason.. Can't wait for more!!!!
I knew it, I knew it!!!!
He gotta find out about this and find his love child.
LOVE THIS STORY!!!
Please write more!
Since this chapter was short, I submitted Chapter 5 at the same time. It should go live any time now...
Thanks for reading!
will wait then ....
Yep, that was what I was suspecting...
as ever, robcub32! I do love your stories, I'm a fan of them all.
I have to say my patience couldn't withstand not going to the other website other readers have sited with this story and carrying on to Ch7, but I'm not going to give anything away for readers on this site. Just keep them coming, cos we all want to know what happens between Devin and Bastin ultimately. Many thanks!
I saw the pregnancy coming, but that doesn't lessen the story. Glad the next chapter isn't far behind.
ha, saw that coming in chapter 3 already. the whole male pregnancy thing seems campy to me, but i've read enough harry potter slash to get that people really like the idea. men cooking, cleaning, being pounded into the mattress, caring about their looks/ clothes/ makeup/ nails/ hair/ hair removal, raising kids -- all hot. men with giant bellies and squeezing out babies? weird. but, i care enough about poor devlin's heartache, and this whole creative sci fi world, to keep reading. also, thanks for posting on lit, cause i had never heard of this ga site!
Love this story! Hope we find out what happened to our favourite alien soon. I love Bastian and his Dev.
I did not see that coming! I seriously thought that he was just transforming into one of them,lol. And I'm a Woman! Five stars for you, one for me:)
Wow, I also thought I knew what was going to happen!!! Keep the surprises coming
So saw that coming but what happened to Bastien?? He wouldn't have run... onto the next chapter to hopefully get an answer
l o l funny
I like this story I kind of seen it coming but I did not expect Deagan to disappear. What an imagination you have I could have done without the snubbed tail and horns. Great story though.
I KNEW IT! As soon as you started mentioning how he was getting nauseous I knew something was up...lol. Love this little twist and I can't wait to see what happens next :)
When he started bleeding and eating more and getting nauseated...... I just knew He was pregnant... especially since he had no tail or horns....
I love stories like this.... guy gets pregnant from alien or non-human lover!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
LOVE IT.... pregnant dudes are totally the BESTEST
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