All Comments on 'Dawn and Marie Ch. 02'

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CajunBillCajunBillover 11 years ago
Great Story Building

You write great stories about real people. So much here is 'slam bang fuck suck and bye'. You develop characters that we can all all relate to. Will Bogart show up? I didn't know you were a sailor. KEEP IT UP - F... the ratings, you have loyal readers.

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