All Comments on 'Working Boss'

Not bad but you need to work on your english. A good editor would be a great help.

Needs work. But was an ok read.

Anxious for the rest

The mechanics are awful. The theme insulting. Where is the buildup? This is smut, not only without a plot, it is has no purpose, or point. It is a waste of this site's space.

......they're a bunch of fat chicks?

i not only want to know what happens later i want to join in and taste what sounds like sweet juicy pussy.

want to here the rest of the story

This story was awful, rushed and very unrealistic! Terrible!

Good story but your plot was rushed climax was great I would have loved to see the part about them going to the bosses house included with this story and a bettee title would have been "work evaluation" and plus more detail dont be shy put what you know will make anyone that reads your stories horny. Other than that this story was nice

That was a good story I loved it and I would like to know what happened at the house.

if you cant tell this story is written by a male.....your a fool....probably worse story i have read!!!!

at the house!

Very rushed, lacked description, and it needed more time for the story to progress. Readers barely know what the characters look like besides their bra sizes and everything. This was poorlywritten, sorry. You can do better though.

i found that stupid!!!

Clearly English is not your first language. But still.... The overall story was not good. Also, the measurement of a bra (32,36,40 etc) is the measurement around. Not the actual cup/breast size. What are you, 13?

At the house

I mean what were you even thinking when you wrote this ??

This is the worst story ever on this site,drop the pen please

I do not think it was that bad, it started out ok, but then it did get a little carried away when they brought the 4th girl Megan in and it looked like she did not want to do anything, but was convinced to try it, I did remember reading this once before

I want to be in a orgy like this so bad I love fat pussy please help me