All Comments on 'Photo Shoot'

by Brandie69

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AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
i want u bad now

man u sound hot if you can get your own brother an erection and a tittie fuck on camera damn girl u bad

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
countinue

this story was coming along well, it'd be great if you can extend it.

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
A little short

Just as it was getting good.... it ended. Please continue.. :)

Brandie69Brandie69over 11 years agoAuthor
Don't worry,

Definitely more to come, so to speak, on this one. :) I'm glad you like it so far. I was incredibly busy in my day job when a reader requested this, and it took me an unbearably long time to get even this far, but I wanted to at least provide a start for the one who had suggested it. Like I said, there will definitely be more, and I will certainly entertain suggestions for where I might go.

B

SusieJSusieJover 11 years ago
I liked it

Brandie, that was a wonderful story. Nice

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
MORE

GREAT story. Would love to read more!!!

WarriorWomanWarriorWomanover 11 years ago
Nice beginning.

Really hope you continue this. ^.^

Mark737Mark737over 11 years ago
Come On!

Leaving us hanging like that! Come on and finish it, please.

peebudypeebudyover 11 years ago
arrrrgh!

i was just about to make myself cum when your story ended abruptly...no fair!

great story. well written. and hot.

we need more...soon!

netgenfnetgenfover 11 years ago
int

eresting beginning

when do we get to see the photos?

just kidding!

when are you going to finish this?

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
Nice start

Yes, this was a nice start to what can be a great story... keep up the great work...

And just for the record, wouldnt mind seeing the pictures too!!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
Great start

Hope you keep going with this. Very well written too.

Brandie69Brandie69over 11 years agoAuthor
Again, thank you to all of you

for your kind, sweet comments. Please be assured that at this moment I am writing the next part. Of course, if you know me at all, you know what I have in store for you, and that is, a long, slow tease. ; )

So, I guess, be careful what you wish for! But more is definitely coming.

B

ErotonautErotonautover 11 years ago
Good to hear there's more to come

I was about to raise an eyebrow over the abrupt end, but your reassurance that another chapter's in the pipeline is great news.

kaidmankaidmanover 11 years ago
wow dynamite

once again you made me into a minute man with your story please continue man this never happens to me

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
My cum runneth over.

Very good, and your attention to detail is not wasted; just don't keep as waiting too long for the next chapter.

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
Wonderful!

You're a gifted and stimulating writer.

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
Very good.....

keep writing.....

RossDanielsRossDanielsover 11 years ago
Loved the growing tension!

And love the fact that there will be more chapters!

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
More.

Again with the teasing? You're turning us all in to nervous wrecks.

Another spectacular story, I look forward to the next installment.

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
WOW

You are the best. All I think of when reading your stories is how wet you must get while writing them.

I look forward to this every day.

RaySunRaySunover 11 years ago
Gonna Need More

Great start. I definitely liked it.

Gonna need another chapter, or two or three or however many can keep up the heat.

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
Awsome

How lucky is your brother who's seeing all of you. Would you also allow a bi-girl like me do the clicking of you?!! Can't wait.....

pg240pg240over 11 years ago
Excellent blend of skill and content

I was wrapped up in the story when it actually dawned on me: hey, this writer has word skills. Wonder word images evoked from your prose. I could virtually see these two as your painted the scene with lean, finely structured sentences. Well done. I'm off to chapter two.

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
So fucking hot

More and more please Cunt lapping sex maniac Lanc's UK

Rawmaster50Rawmaster50over 11 years ago
Damn!

Weellll, I know I will go and read the second part of this story as you made a point of stopping right where you did...naughty, naughty. Loved it 5 stars

Brandie69Brandie69over 11 years agoAuthor
I must sincerely apologize

for taking so long to respond to everyone's kind comments here!

As I mentioned in the Author's Note, this story was requested by a reader. It's been exciting to watch it become one of my most-read and most-commented stories. There's always an interesting balance, even a tension, between writing what you (yes, I'm talking to you) want, and writing what I want. From the very beginning, this Photo Shoot thing has been less about me, and more like writing on assignment. I've let it go places I probably wouldn't have done, if I'd been left to my own devices.

Anyway, thanks for all your responses. I hope you keep reading. There's more, at least up to Chapter 4 (which should be approved by The Powers in another day or two).

B

JerrycuriousJerrycuriousabout 11 years ago
Hot Read

Suce a good story and such a talented writer ! Can 't wait to get to Ch. 2.

tabbertabberabout 11 years ago
Awesome!

Now if only I could turn back time and be blessed with a Sis like her!

bigdaddyg123bigdaddyg123over 10 years ago
"Photo Shoot Ch. 01:" - Unnamed Bro and Unnamed Sis - (Brother and Sister)

NOTE: To the writer/author: Readers have a more personal connection to a story when the character's have identification, as in Names.

For the sister to have been somewhat reluctant at the beginning she sure has now become pretty well uninhibited to the point of both her and her brother being naked during the photo sessions, to her even musing about taking his dick into her mouth! Whow!!

My imagination is working overtime on the image of sister in her swim outfits! My wife used to model swimsuits during the several years of our engagement (and not living together) before we married. She's five feet seven inches and 36-D boobs; many times the bra straps broke, failed, etc., and she was sans her bra top! So, I can visualize this sister's maneuvering and flaunting!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago
~

Oh god~ I was thinking about my big brother doing this to me while reading ♥

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Sister love

My older sister caught me with her panties when I was 13. Out of this developed a ten year sexual relationship. Sister sex is the ultimate sex.

pg240pg240over 6 years ago
Bravo

A perfect ending line. Leads me to conclude the scene in my imagination, and I appreciate that.

pg240pg240over 6 years ago
P.S.

Before, of course, enjoying the author's chapter two, that is!

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Nice story

Love to hear more about the shoot. I have done plenty & it is true the air is very tense as both feel horny

Hope you tell us more

ROCKY70ROCKY70over 4 years ago
Not bad for a start. !!!! ^*!^*!^*!

Keep this one going, it could get really hot.

If he can keep from pushing things to soon,

he could get laid. Read is ok so far.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Simply delicious.

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