All Comments on 'Four Hour Wait Ch. 01'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
This was horrible.

The husband comes off as a whiner, so how would he have the balls to cheat. His wife completely emasculated h and why? He was four hours late. Why was he late? He didn't even get angry, which is what any person would do when treated like a piece of shit. This is one fucked up story.

tazz317tazz317over 11 years ago
RIGHT OR WRONG

the upper hand usually wins. TK U MLJ LV NV

LickideesplitLickideesplitover 11 years ago
Anon - horrible

It ain't over...the fat lady didn't sing, yet!

(But if your point is that a male-dominant future is unlikely for Hubby, regardless of his recent past behavior -i.e. 4 hour late reasons- then I totally agree with you. However, change may be delicious ... Well, it will be for Sweetie, for sure!)

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
Bdsm at its worst.

So the bitch wants a sissy gay cross dressing freak for a husband. How sad anyone thinks this erotic. It belongs in the Fetish section.

betrayedbylovebetrayedbyloveover 11 years ago
It Doesn't Belong Here

Put this tale where it belongs.

LickideesplitLickideesplitover 11 years ago
Thank you Sydney

When you're right, you're right!

JonTaylorJonTaylorover 11 years ago
I Get It

Woman writer fantasizing about dominance over her man. Neither chartacter is believable, not do they have to be. It's a fantasy.

DWornockDWornockover 11 years ago
She had him to shave all over.

Wrong catagory. Should be fetish so 1*.

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