All Comments on 'The Blood Slave Ch. 01'

by lollapalooza

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kinky019kinky019over 11 years ago
More!!!!!!!!!

I need more! I'll be checking for updates

AnomandarisAnomandarisover 11 years ago
Good start!

Interesting premise. Nice to see some 'not so nice' vampires for a change. I hope you continue to explore the bdsm elements. Looking forward to the next installement.

lollapaloozalollapaloozaover 11 years agoAuthor
Chapter 2 is coming soon!

Thanks for all the glorious feedback, and the high ratings. Very nice.

DemonicWingsDemonicWingsover 10 years ago
This felt really rushed

It's a good story and I really like it, but maybe you could redo it and slow down and go through the thoughts and feelings not to mention actions penny and Draco are going through

jott50jott50over 9 years ago

good , but it needs to flow better

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