All Comments on 'Quick Cash Ch. 02'

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katye43katye43over 11 years ago
wtg

very good follow up

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
Love it!

I'd like to start by telling you how much I enjoyed this chapter, as well as the last. You develop the story quickly, without being too quick. The way you describe things is lovely, and very erotic. That being said, you've misspelled a form of "scrape" in both chapters. Metal scrapes, unless you mean that there is a scrap (being a small strip) of metal, which I doubt. Also, "scraping," as in "The metal, scraping against the floor, made a loud noise" rather than "scrapping," as in "We decided upon scrapping the idea, because it wasn't very good."

Still, fantastic story! Just thought I'd let you know. It honestly didn't take away from the story much, if at all.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago
More please

Oh it must take several more sessions to attain their goal..right? ;)

Loved it.. made me cum hard and harder and again and again. Thank you.

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
More

There must be more to this story, carry on with a follow-up

GrrrreatImaginationGrrrreatImaginationover 8 years ago
I concur...

this story is turning into a really hot story. I'd like to see you continue it. Thanks for sharing.

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
More??

I hope there is more to this story. It’s good so far 😊😊

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