by Temprance
I'd like to start by telling you how much I enjoyed this chapter, as well as the last. You develop the story quickly, without being too quick. The way you describe things is lovely, and very erotic. That being said, you've misspelled a form of "scrape" in both chapters. Metal scrapes, unless you mean that there is a scrap (being a small strip) of metal, which I doubt. Also, "scraping," as in "The metal, scraping against the floor, made a loud noise" rather than "scrapping," as in "We decided upon scrapping the idea, because it wasn't very good."
Still, fantastic story! Just thought I'd let you know. It honestly didn't take away from the story much, if at all.
Oh it must take several more sessions to attain their goal..right? ;)
Loved it.. made me cum hard and harder and again and again. Thank you.
this story is turning into a really hot story. I'd like to see you continue it. Thanks for sharing.