by Wolfblackthorne
...hard to comment with just this....
I rated five stars because you write enjoyably. I hope to see a continuation... in fact I look forward to it.
Thanks, Jane Marwood
Aksana has topped my sexy vampire / succubus list. Lots more chapters please
Thank you for the comments! I am so happy you loved my story. Will be putting out a second chapter soon. Thank you very much for the kind support.
Wow where does he shop, only 8.25 for two packs of beef, noodles and spag sauce!
enjoyed reading it very much.. awaiting the next part.. wanna knw what happens next :)
thanks for the support and favs. this makes writing even more enjoyable knowing some one enjoys it. part 2 is up.. enjoy!
Somehow I found this story a bit cute. Good job. Happy to see a second chapter.
This was, I have to admit, pretty damn hot and extremely well-written. I enjoyed it.
very descriptive, felt like i could completely picture it. Could see the submission happening and the helplessness. Really good read
I was asked to look this story over and I have to say it was damn good: well written with a good narrative. The most striking thing was the heavy sense of the eroticism of control that pervades it.
Shivers... Totally love it, and look forward to reading the other chapters :)
very well done i love the detail. paints a very vivd picture in my mind
I don't often read horror, but this story is written so pictorial that it's easy to imagine the situation, the feelings and the mixture of fear and attraction.
I particularly liked the description of hypnotic effects :)
And... what happened to his wounds...? I have to read chapter 2