All Comments on 'Under My Skin'

by Wolfblackthorne

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PistolpackinpetePistolpackinpeteover 11 years ago
Guys got bad luck with beasts...

...hard to comment with just this....

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
intriguing...

I rated five stars because you write enjoyably. I hope to see a continuation... in fact I look forward to it.

Thanks, Jane Marwood

BakedbeankidBakedbeankidover 11 years ago
Loved It

Aksana has topped my sexy vampire / succubus list. Lots more chapters please

WolfblackthorneWolfblackthorneover 11 years agoAuthor
thank you to those that commented

Thank you for the comments! I am so happy you loved my story. Will be putting out a second chapter soon. Thank you very much for the kind support.

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
Good value

Wow where does he shop, only 8.25 for two packs of beef, noodles and spag sauce!

jonmartin22jonmartin22over 11 years ago
nice one!

I hope you keep on going..

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
wonderful-next part please

enjoyed reading it very much.. awaiting the next part.. wanna knw what happens next :)

WolfblackthorneWolfblackthorneover 11 years agoAuthor
thanks

thanks for the support and favs. this makes writing even more enjoyable knowing some one enjoys it. part 2 is up.. enjoy!

WarfolomeiWarfolomeiover 11 years ago
O.O

Somehow I found this story a bit cute. Good job. Happy to see a second chapter.

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
Mistress wanted me to comment on this

This was, I have to admit, pretty damn hot and extremely well-written. I enjoyed it.

jenndolljenndollover 11 years ago
very good read

very descriptive, felt like i could completely picture it. Could see the submission happening and the helplessness. Really good read

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
Compeling and Disturbingly Erotic

I was asked to look this story over and I have to say it was damn good: well written with a good narrative. The most striking thing was the heavy sense of the eroticism of control that pervades it.

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
So gets to me in a good way :)

Shivers... Totally love it, and look forward to reading the other chapters :)

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago
very nice

very well done i love the detail. paints a very vivd picture in my mind

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
Very good

I like it

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
great read

he writes well very good story

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
A Good Start

Its an impressive start to a story.. Really good. :)

AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago
well done

I don't often read horror, but this story is written so pictorial that it's easy to imagine the situation, the feelings and the mixture of fear and attraction.

I particularly liked the description of hypnotic effects :)

And... what happened to his wounds...? I have to read chapter 2

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