All Comments on 'My Birthday Present'

a wild and crazy minx she is. Just lucky none of the passers by wore blue uniforms. mmmm

I really love stories that involve a loving slow tease. So often tease stories involve humiliation, which I don't like. But a woman slowly, intentionally driving her man insane, now that's hot!

Cime on... Nice little story but lose the text speak. What are you twelve

Just job none of them were cops.

I did something similar many times and each one has been wonderful. Cops are easy to spot, it just takes to be careful. It is more risky, believe me, to anger common passerby. They can call the police. THAT is a real risk. But if you are careful not to exaggerate... You can come along with.

Awesome story, and beautifully written

I would love to experience this.

What a wonderful birthday present.

You really like the name Karen, don't you?

Good premise.

But doesn't deliver.

Boom. Cock in pussy. What's the rush? Needed foreplay. Lots of foreplay before fucking began. Needs breast play. Needs her reaction to it. Needs his reaction to it.

Needs some handjob teasing. Needs some teasing him with her pussy. Can he smell it? Woud he like to taste it? Touch it. Finger it. Can he imagine how good it'd feel when he put his cock in it? Can he imagine how good she'd feel when he gave her an orgasm?

Then finally, cock in pussy. Make her cum, but don't let him cum.

Three stars.