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Michelle Goes Out And Gets Pimped

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by Anonymous

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by Anonymous08/13/12

Of Michelle adulterous series

Make her die of STD.

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by Anonymous08/13/12

Ridiculous

You can always tell when a female writes a story pretending to be a male. It never goes very well. It's the same when a male pretends to be writing from a female perspective. It just is not a good idea.

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by Anonymous08/13/12

kiss goodbye the law firm

kisss hello to AIDS and jail time and finally a drugged overage dried up dead body in a dumpster or something popping our half breed bastards using up the welfare system

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by tazz31708/13/12

MICHELLE...MA BELLE.....NO MO

turned herself into a slutty HO. TK U MLJ LV NV

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by Lickideesplit08/13/12

Unlikely

Sure, someone with the internal discipline to complete law school and pass the bar, then completes 15-20 years of experience in some aspect of law and interacts daily with other lawyers in all aspects of law. Such a person is going to engage in behavior which is predictably risky in health, public exposure and safety! She is frequently exposed to the consequences of such poor choices! Somehow this person will find teens to be compellingly attractive and interesting to be around! I think not! There is fiction, then there is fantasy!

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by deck2308/13/12

life ending

As a Fant story it was very good but you do know in real life it would be over for her and him . Her job would be gone and she would get busted and maybe AIDS or any of the other STDs.
But as a story it was very good. So lets have the next part to the saga?????

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by Anonymous08/15/12

All the sad honkys

They will trash the story and the author, all the while knowing that most of them - IF they are able to find a woman and are able to hold on to her for a while - KNOW that if she isn't sucking and fucking black cock, she's damn sure thinking about it.

Just think. You thought that she was out shopping, but when she came home she might had a bag or something, but chances are she also had a load of premium African-American cum in her pussy or her ass or both, when she laid down in bed with you and said ,"Not tonight honey, I'm tired."

Sleep tight, guys.

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by Anonymous08/15/12

To The Last Commenter

Can you actually read or were you hoping for pictures?What a fucking moronic comment. But I guess I should consider the source.

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by Anonymous09/25/12

Great Story

I can't understand how anybody can get so upset and argue about how likely this all is. It's a fuckn story and I like it alot. The writing style is great, the fantasy described is very good and I hope there will be more like this coming from the author

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