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Blowing the Card Game

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by whiteasianlvr08/15/12

Great First Story

Congratulations on your first story. I found it very realistic. I'd be very curious to see how you could develop it into a series. Specifically, how does having sucked his friends change the nature of his relationship with them and his wife? Is there a shift in the power balance? What's next? Keep writing!!!!

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by 60andhorny08/15/12

very hot

Very good for your first story. I need to find a poker game like that.

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by Anonymous08/16/12

Excellent

Really loved this story, especially when he comes in his own pants without having to touch himself. That got me super horny

If writing more, be true to your instincts.

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by Sappho10008/16/12

Thanks

Thanks for your comments. I will be continuing the story. In fact I originally had the first two parts written. I was not happy with the second part and rewrote it. I will be giving it another pass before sending to the editor.

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by lovebothsexes08/16/12

card games

seems like a great way to pay off a debt.
I know I wouldn't mind

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by Anonymous09/04/12

Sequel!

Fantastic! Please write a follow-up!

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by Anonymous12/22/12

SO

so who wants to play poker?

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