All Comments on 'Rainy Days'

by TsukishimaXai

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nastolgiclikeyounastolgiclikeyouover 11 years ago
Well done

It was a little confusing at first, but very sweet in the end.

William smythWilliam smythover 11 years ago
Well done indeed!

An absolutely beautiful first story.

We need to hear more from this talented author.

avidreadravidreadrover 11 years ago
Very good

A very good, very sweet story. You expressed the laziness of a rainy day excellently, as well as the love between the two men. I did start to feel sorry, though, for Santiago. Did that poor man ever get to eat... food??

equusbynatureequusbynatureover 10 years ago

That was absolutely beautiful. It reminded me of that song by Madonna, LA ISLA BONITA.

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