All Comments on 'The Huntress'

A well laid out story that has great potential for future chapters. Please keep them coming!

That was really good. I hated it didn't have more and I'm hopeful it will contain more ASAP! Love it

do plural's require apostrophe's?

Good potential here but repeated errors in spelling and punctuation as well as a lack of deep imagery hurt the writing. I would suggest a good thesaurus, a spell-checker, and proofreading.

not listen to them ass holes. Your story is wonderful. Please keep writing.

Some punctuation & similar issues, but that's being nit-picky. Overall a good start & am eager to read the next part.

You cant stop there, we demand more. Good work.

Please write more

I have a list of favorite stories that I have started. This will be added to that list and I look forward to seeing what you write next if you plan to continue that is.