All Comments on 'Driving Home Sunday Morning'

by Darkinside

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Scotsman69Scotsman69over 11 years ago
Interesting

self-examination. Thank you.

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
Incredibly disgusting

Incredibly disgusting subhuman author.

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
I thought well written

But too short. Embellishment needed, sure one pissed on her, but how many of "them" had cum on her and her hair?

Finally, who was she, by age, and her status ( married, single), and how had this desire developed.

Thanks Don

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
if she continues down this path

she will self destruck .. heading for a bad ending

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
interesting

I disagree that we need more detail. It's a vignette, a scene from a life. Why do you need more. So you can hate her & despise her more?

Danno_61455Danno_61455over 11 years ago
TIGHT

You have a gifted mind. A writer so keenly aware of how people driven to debase themselves think and rationalize is a rare person.

This was a short piece of fiction but enjoyable just the same.

Remain_in_shadowRemain_in_shadowover 11 years ago
Re: incredibly disgusting

Feels like you read a different story, and felt completed to call the author names. Or maybe you are a name-caller by nature, and that will be your contribution to the world.

I thought it was a sharp insight to a moment in a persons life, on the edge between wanting and fear of wanting. Well done.

Suite21menSuite21menover 11 years ago
Worth A Five Star From Me.....

Succinct, biting, well written story of a drive home. I liked that she was sober this time. Thank you for your efforts, Darkinside!

liz33ndliz33ndabout 8 years ago

Not my story. Didn't like it much.

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Wrong category!

golden shower makes it fetish! Zero stars.

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