by jasliz
I feel that this pair have unfinished business. We want to know how their relationship evolves and grows. A story this well written demands a fifth and maybe a sixth chapter. (Please)
I agree. This needs more chapters. Your story and character development are excellent. An easy to read story. You have the gift. Please continue writing.
A very nice and well written storyline.
A sweet love affair between brother and sister is always something special.
Thanks for the read
This is from Ch. 1.........:
("I'm going to cum, Julie... like now!"
I couldn't talk, let alone react to do something or tell him to pull out. It was too late anyway. Todd's cock exploded inside my already dripping wet and pulsing pussy, sending his seed deep inside me.)
In light of this part, no mention of birth control and this has only been going on for a week, I think the obvious direction this story needs to go and keep these two together is for her to become pregnant!?!?!
I really hope you will continue . Awesome .Can't say much more nor do i need too . Thanks
Wow! What a great series! Hot, sexy action and the beginning of some sweet, heartfelt lovin'...I sincerely hope you continue. I've become somewhat attached to these two and hope their love thrives.
Your writing is great. Your story line is flows without a dull moment.
Keep writing and keep this story line going.
BUT; I think that NO GUY should ask anyone else to consider Anal; unless he's received it himself with a comparably sized Dildo or Cock, they really have no idea what they're asking the other person to do (especially when they think they're larger than average)...DKP
end it here. Sooo much more joy and controversy to this story. Especially when they reunite for the first time after being away from each other.
Then we need an ending of some sort maybe where they do survive the time away from each other and end up moving away so they can be together and leaving behind disgusted family
Wow! Just great :). They should work on finding a school that has what they both need and transfer, then when they graduate just stay and live there, far away from family and friends! At least thats the ending Im painting in my head, heh.
Thanks for writing!!
That was really great and I do hope there is more where they finally end up together.
and just as good as the first time. PLEASE write some more of this wonderful story.
Great story. Really glad that Julie realised that she loved Todd. It would be really good to have a sequel to the story one where they hold true to each other during their time at separate schools while they wait for the holidays to come around.
I agree with the anon comment below, great story and it would be good to have another chapter where Todd and Julie are together again and plan out their future together.
great story. but it needs another chapter - maybe occuring a few years later after college. its a great tale with strong lovable characters. PLEASE MORE!!!!
We need more about Todd and Sara.. How did they last. Did they time anyone else. Details.....
Now that I've read all the chapters, I will say I liked this one. A lot. I think you need to leave it as is. Leave the audience wanting more. Let our imaginations take us where we will. Thankfully you have many more I have not read. Please continue to write.
Good storyline. Although I can't find closure with how it ended it's still an enjoyable read. Maybe , just maybe , the story will go on.