All Comments on 'Summer of Fire'

Very gritty and hot.

I didn't much care for any of the characters. Jake was a Texas Troglodyte, Lynn was a Barbie and Randy was just kind of dim. But the action was hot enough.

I wanted to give it 4* as a story, but the MMF kiss is going to earn you a bunch of 1-bombs from the LW bots, so I gave you a 5* to average it out a little.

I knew that kiss would get me in trouble--but that's what the story demanded!

Gotta tell you, this was a very well done piece. It is very believable, the action is hot, and the visuals are great.

Keep them coming!

Ordinarily, I'm not a big fan of MMF, but I'm always a sucker for stories that are so well written.

A well written story with good characters and plot. I really enjoyed the ending which rounded off a great tale. Look forward to reading more in the future.

I would love a sequel.

Unlike a lot of haters and bashers here, I LOVE threesome and LW stories. This one was great. Please keep writing them. A fine entry in the contest. It was hot!

I am a fan of MMF. Very well written story.

Very good, and it left me wanting more.

Wonderful story. Very well written. Looking forward to a continuation of this story. Very hot sharing a sexy wife .....

Great story - thank you.

Very well written piece. Nicely done.

Now I've read everything you posted. :-( Please write more! As a female with a recurring MMF fantasy, I HAD to give you a 5. A few more speaking lines might help Randy with that "dim" image problem, but otherwise the action was spot on. Wondering if Lynn has ever had a DP fantasy??

I, too, had slight misgivings about the kiss, but people push the envelope at moments of high emotion and it's not as if the guys were simply kissing each other and ignoring Lynn. Of course, now this barrier is down, will Jake want to take it further and invite Randy into his wife's pussy? Not sure Lynn would be up for that.