All Comments on 'Voyeur & Tanning'

I couldn't understand why he wanted to go out with his friends when he had a hot mom coming home in the afternoon.

I'd think he would want to stay at home and wait on her to return and then pester her until he could fuck her.

Still, it's a hot story and I enjoyed the read.

Thanks

Pleasant reading...

i've didn't actually read all it just yet. bits & pieces. here + there.

absolutely loved everything that you've done about it thus far. can't wait

get back read more. "p.s." mother\son - not really my style. can't wait

read more later today

Your story is incredibly hot- very literate, it flows nicely, & is very erotic! Tho you left it so it stands alone, I (&others) hope you'll give us more. It would be a shame if a writer as good as you left us w/o the hope of subsequent chapters. It is so very hot that Mom has an incest fantasy & is willing & eager to fulfill those fantasies with the son. I think she should get a chance to explore other scenarios- vacation at a nude resort, dinner at a fancy restaurant, on an airplane, on an Adults Only cruise where others know they are M/S, etc.... please don't leave us hanging!!!

geez ! that was soooo sex hoty and

I'm a believer in the fact that tan lines are indeed really sexy and a big turn on. The story is a great stand alone story and I don't think it needs more chapters. I'm glad you let this story stand on its' own. I'm looking forward to your next story as so many rely on ongoing chapters and make their stories more and more boring. Your writing is of a very high caliber and your erotica is great and believable.

The BEST !!!!!!!!!

HeyAll, as usual with all your stories, this one was interesting, had a great theme, smooth progress and most of all, it was very arousing.

Keep them coming.

Another "grand slam"....kudos lots of kudos !!!!!!

Thanks Don

I wish I ahd a momwho wanted to have fantasies fullfilled like that. Keep up the great stories.

I copied it into a Word program so I could read it later. Read it and loved it, but when I came back to comment and vote it was gone. Weird. Either way, it was hot. The only thing that is bugging me and this isn't really particularly to your story but all the mothers are so hot and fit and etc. Yes that would probably be the ideal woman for most men that want to fuck mom, but lets be honest. It's the nasty ones that usually are the ones willing to fuck their boys. I know someone that would probably fuck her son if he made an effort; in fact I know for a fact she would let him if he made a move but I never told him. His mother isn't hot like this one but man she can suck a cock like a hoover vacuum cleaner.

Another great story from a most excellent writer.

THIS ONE SHOULD NEVER END. THIS STORY COULD HAVE A LONG RUN. AND I THINK EVERY ONE WOULD BE HAPPY. A FAN FOREVER MORE MORE MORE

Fabulous story - HOT - arousing !! Yes, I think another chapter is due, as they are just beginning and I am sure have much more to do yet !! Thank you.

Mum/Son, and sex in the pool.

Sincerely Thank you.

i love tan lines too. this was perfect and so hot. thank you.

that is exceptionally well written. This was every man's fantasy come true. Thank you!

Part 2!?!?!?!?!?

very hot, my pussy is so wet and warm.....ty !

great hot story was hard all the way through.cant wait for the next story.

i want more. i can still see the mother on top of her sons cock fucking him in the morning sun..what a way for a mother and son to love each other.

Nothing beats a boy sticking his fat young prick up between his mommy's legs and blowing his balls up his own mother's cunt. Up his mother's cunt is where a boy's rich creamy sperm belongs.

great story-really hot sex, nicely written thanks

That mom's story about her brother and mom could be another story from you! It's just begging for more details!

And give your characters names!

All I can ask is relax a bit more, overall, seemed a bit tight. IDK, I hate criticizing people.

Outstanding story. I loved the tempo of your story, but am practically droolingvto find out what happened next. Did he move into Moms bedroom? What happend when he weny off to college? Inquiring miknds want to know!

Thank you very much gor this story, HeyAll.

100/100 = A+ = (*****+)

Bravissimo!!

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Hi everybody:

If you are into mother-son sex stories, this one is a MUST READ.

This story achieves a lot: IT'S EROTIC & POETIC & PERFECTLY WRITTEN & BRINGS BACK MEMORIES OF LOOKING AT YOUR MOM IN HER BATHING SUIT AT THE BREAKFAST TABLE WHEN YOU COULD GET A GANDER AT HER BOOBS & ASS & THIGHS & KNEES & TUMMY & EYES...

But when she told him about her fantasy and how long she had been thinking about it, what was wrong with him? Knowing she is going to be home in the evening he goes out with friends? Twice? She has to keep pursuing him? I am glad he could roust himself out of bed as early as 9:00 am. (can you hear the sarcasm?)

When they finally got together it was beautiful. The story could (and did) end at a poignant moment in their lives. But it would also be nice to know how it worked out between the two of them. ???

Mom and son sex is more common then we think.

As soon as we were inside, I had to look at my mom's beautiful naked body, she was so hot, I was hard again already. We wrapped our arms around each other and began a long passionate kiss. I had to have her again, right now. I broke the kiss and grabbed her hand, taking mom to my bedroom. I laid her on my bed and got on top of her. I looked into her eyes as I took the head of my cock and slid it up and down her pussy lips. "Quit being a tease," she said. "I want that cock inside me." So I pushed myself into her. I slid in pretty easily since she was still so wet. "Oh, you feel so good mom." I said. "You are so sexy, and your tan lines make you look even hotter." "Oh baby, we should have started this sooner." " I would have been happy to have your cock inside me a long time ago." Oh yes, fuck me baby, fuck your mother." I fully extended my arms so I could see more of her naked body. Her tits were almost like headlights, standing out against the tan surrounding them. I began alternating my view from my mom's face, to her nice boobs, to my dick fucking her pussy. The sights were such a turn on, I couldn't help but start pumping into her harder and faster, speeding up consistently. "Oh god honey!" Your so big!" "You fuck me so good!" I could feel my orgasm building in my balls as I smacked into her pussy. "Oh god mom!: "I'm getting close!" I told her. The next thing I knew I was fucking my mom as hard as I could. "Huh, huh, huh, uh, oh, oh mom, uh oh, oh, oh, god, uh, uh, uh, oh, oh, oh, huh, huh, huh, huh, huh!!" Then I exploded inside her, shooting stream after steam of my cum against her cervix. I kept thrusting into her until I was sure I had nothing left in my balls, then I collapsed on top of her.

Somehow it seems to be a real life story. Keep mom and son happy. Keep those of us known as readers happy - expand the story with more chapters.

For me this is such a romanic story between a mother and son, and the love can be seen and felt through the story, right down to the very end.

What a wonderful story; a dream come true. I hope you continue the story as their relationship expands. Was the anonymous comment below your expansion of the story or someone else's? Whichever, it's a good start and follows my line of thought.

loved it. wish there was more into the "why" the mom liked swimmimg after her brother and her mother did it in the pool. i can imagine a great deal, and that was hawt! That part is dripping, excuse the pun, with sexual innuendo. more would be good!

Love tan lines. Don't know many people who are laying out in the sun tanning at 9:00 AM though.

I loved the fact that "Mom" was already into wanting to share herself with her son. She had already fantasized about it and actually started the whole thing by showing him her tits that first morning. Good job, "Mom". Maybe you will let him give you multiple squirting orgasms with his fingers and tongue... feed him his morning "juice".

THANK YOU FOR A VERY EROTIC STORY. JUST LOVED IT. I WAS A VERY FORTUNATE YOUNG MAN TO GET TO EXPERIENCE MY SHARE OF OLDER WOMEN AND NOW THAT I AM "THE OLDER ONE" THERE'S MY 22 YEAR YOUNG PETITE DAUGHTER WITH A PERFECT BODY! GOING TO VISIT HER THIS WEEKEND.

I was sexually attracted to my mother very much... & then some. She was the main character in most of my jack-off fantasies.

My mom & i used to spend 2 to 3 weeks each summer at a relative's lakefront cabin not far from our city. My mom was in her bikini most of the day. On the porch she would wear a T-shirt (no bra!) & shorts shorts (that was the fashion of the day!) I could see the very bottom part of her butt cheeks.

Thank you for this story!

Aching now - so much - with hopefully more to cum! Well written!

Now this is more like it. As you can tell I was reading out of sequence but I'm in line now. Soooo what's next for Mother and Son. Please do tell. Hint Hint!!!

Please write more.....i love how this story is going....

Very very sexy, I touching myself from the outset knowing that they would fuck

Had such a good wank a wonderful climax

Well written erotic story. Really loved it.

Favorite Author.

of the 6 or 8 of your stories I've read, this one stands out.

Must read more of your work. If they're half as good, they'll be great, too. Thanks.

Beautiful story. Well written and exciting. I’m curious to see if the relationship sexually continues. Love to read more of the story. Thanks.

I loved it. One of my fantasies also. Thanks.

My mom would stare at my hard young cock when we swam but never did any thing

Nice erotic mom son incest story. Quite natural build up but would like to extend the plot to include their grand parents making it incest orgy. I know one such family of four parents and their kids, all enjoy taking turns or together without any inhibition of taboo

A sunsual incestuous love story between mother and son. If only humans could be as mature, emotionally secure, self-aware and self-assured as the characters in this story, how much better off the human race would be.

That was great!!

Great story. I felt like I was there.

Love it, as with most of your work