All Comments on 'This Is Who I Am Now'

by Darkinside

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CeliaisAlienaCeliaisAlienaover 11 years ago
What she's thinking!

I really like the overall mood of this, the introspection, the sense of proud secrecy and also the mystery that goes on in people's lives. All the shards of erotic memory are very sexy and well-paced; so too are the little droplets of humor.

Though it does seem like Greg became 'Bob' for a second (I know, it happens lol), this is really a very good piece, It's realistic and relateable, and conveys an energetic sense of erotic transformation and all the secret possibilities in life!

Scotsman69Scotsman69over 11 years ago
Very fine writing

You're one of the best, Darkinside.

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