by vicjohnson
I would like to read another chapter of this story, i say you should continue it.
Really enjoyed this story....home there's more chapters cumming!!!
Thanks for the comments. I don't know if I'll continue this series but I'll probably do another similar story.
This is an incredible story, you kept my attention and got me beyond hot!!!!
What you ought to do is another story but one where the guys skewered end up being dressed by the t-girls and getting into that lifestyle as well...
Hot story being domme tgirls bet they make the boys suck each and fcuk each other before engaging in a hard spit roasting!
Loved the story .What lucky guys, I hope you will write more. Thanks again for a wonderful dream
As a longtime (since age 12) crossdresser, I loved your story. :-) Well done. Oh for two men to knock on my door like that.
Mmmmm yummy
Joanne
joannemitchell67@yahoo.com
excellent tale......loved it.....can't wait for sequels of the boys getting double teamed.....:)
Hot story. The names Jessie and Yasmin make me wonder if you've been watching TSSeduction, though. ;P
Loved the story. Seriously lucky guys... Keep writing, it's really hot ;)
I really like your stories but. Would be hotter if the guys resisted more. And maybe like in t girl unversity part 2 the guy should of ran and made the girl chase him would be more exciting if the guys did the unexpected not just submit but still your stories are hot.
All this material and an excited audience and you stop to soon?
It was good but those girls attitudes kind of ruined it for me i hope you made them such bitches on purpose and that they get a come uppance because that "once you came into the apartment you were mine" line just made me want to shoot or castrate those two
This story deserves to be at the top of the chart for the category. Now if some studio would take your work and make movies that would be a best seller! Great writing!
Would have liked to read the story told from both guy's perspective though.
I liked it.
Just a few comments.
The Girls could seduce the guys first, teasing them before jumping straight to action.
The 69, great idea, but no development... no fingering, no rimming?
No lube for ass virgins?
Love the idea of the dominant girls, but it was really like cumming fast.
Liked the touch of the post it note...
This was so good! I wanted more as I read it! I couldn't get enough! Would love to see another chapter!
If you discount that the sex between the two hung trans women and two guys was forcible rape by the women on the men, then this was a hot story. Don't get me wrong, I love the hung trans dom smaller sub male trope. but I'm not a fan of rape and excessive verbal degradation of terms like calling someone a "cock sleeve". Before everyone piles on about the anon trashing this story. I know that it is the author's work, not written expressly forme. etc. etc. I generally liked the story, and I'm not trying to piss on everyone's wank fetish. Thanks for listening.
@anonymous below, no need to discount, the sex was not rape; there’s nothing in the narrative to suggest that the two young men couldn’t’t just get up and leave. Their wills may have been overcome by the firdlcefulness of the two women, but each guy could have put an end to it by getting up and walking out. Simple as that. Did the trans women play psychological hardball and the element of surprise? For sure, but not rape. I prosecuted rape cases for a decade. I wouldn’t’t have touched this case.
I mean the fact that he said he wanted to stop means it was rape. Truth hurts sorry