All Comments on 'New Neighbors'

by vicjohnson

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caseykeller2001caseykeller2001over 11 years ago
great story

I would like to read another chapter of this story, i say you should continue it.

bobscnjbobscnjover 11 years ago
Very NICE!!

Really enjoyed this story....home there's more chapters cumming!!!

vicjohnsonvicjohnsonover 11 years agoAuthor

Thanks for the comments. I don't know if I'll continue this series but I'll probably do another similar story.

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
OMG

This is an incredible story, you kept my attention and got me beyond hot!!!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
Wonderful--a suggestion

What you ought to do is another story but one where the guys skewered end up being dressed by the t-girls and getting into that lifestyle as well...

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago

Well written story, hope to read a sequel or two!

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
Hot

Hot story being domme tgirls bet they make the boys suck each and fcuk each other before engaging in a hard spit roasting!

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
thanks

Loved the story .What lucky guys, I hope you will write more. Thanks again for a wonderful dream

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
Dont stop now!

Hope you keep writing, maybe add more shemales!

Joannemitchell67Joannemitchell67over 11 years ago
Lucky Girls

As a longtime (since age 12) crossdresser, I loved your story. :-) Well done. Oh for two men to knock on my door like that.

Mmmmm yummy

Joanne

joannemitchell67@yahoo.com

wolf9696wolf9696over 11 years ago

excellent tale......loved it.....can't wait for sequels of the boys getting double teamed.....:)

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
Jessie and Yasmin?

Hot story. The names Jessie and Yasmin make me wonder if you've been watching TSSeduction, though. ;P

Luv2lickualloverLuv2lickualloverover 11 years ago

Loved the story. Seriously lucky guys... Keep writing, it's really hot ;)

studmuffin911studmuffin911about 11 years ago
wow really amazing

I really like your stories but. Would be hotter if the guys resisted more. And maybe like in t girl unversity part 2 the guy should of ran and made the girl chase him would be more exciting if the guys did the unexpected not just submit but still your stories are hot.

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
cock

want to suck that

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
only 1 page?

All this material and an excited audience and you stop to soon?

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
enjoyed but pissed off

It was good but those girls attitudes kind of ruined it for me i hope you made them such bitches on purpose and that they get a come uppance because that "once you came into the apartment you were mine" line just made me want to shoot or castrate those two

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
What now?

That cum must of tasted really good!

skywriter62skywriter62over 8 years ago
Definately one for the hall of fame!

This story deserves to be at the top of the chart for the category. Now if some studio would take your work and make movies that would be a best seller! Great writing!

networkgurunetworkguruover 7 years ago
Great Story

Would have liked to read the story told from both guy's perspective though.

LuganisLuganisabout 6 years ago
Good but to fast & short

I liked it.

Just a few comments.

The Girls could seduce the guys first, teasing them before jumping straight to action.

The 69, great idea, but no development... no fingering, no rimming?

No lube for ass virgins?

Love the idea of the dominant girls, but it was really like cumming fast.

Liked the touch of the post it note...

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Loved it

Can't wait to read more of Jessie and yaz

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
More please!

This was so good! I wanted more as I read it! I couldn't get enough! Would love to see another chapter!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

5-⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐s

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

Great read still one of my favorite fantasies being taken by a shemale

smoothed273smoothed273over 1 year ago

👍👍👍👍💋💋💋💋💋💋💋

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

A erotic adventure of how sweet Tgirl love can be.

smoothed273smoothed273about 1 year ago

I wonder about a; housewarming "PARTY".

AnonymousAnonymous11 months ago

If you discount that the sex between the two hung trans women and two guys was forcible rape by the women on the men, then this was a hot story. Don't get me wrong, I love the hung trans dom smaller sub male trope. but I'm not a fan of rape and excessive verbal degradation of terms like calling someone a "cock sleeve". Before everyone piles on about the anon trashing this story. I know that it is the author's work, not written expressly forme. etc. etc. I generally liked the story, and I'm not trying to piss on everyone's wank fetish. Thanks for listening.

AnonymousAnonymous7 months ago

Heaven.

AnonymousAnonymous5 months ago

Loved it!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 months ago

@anonymous below, no need to discount, the sex was not rape; there’s nothing in the narrative to suggest that the two young men couldn’t’t just get up and leave. Their wills may have been overcome by the firdlcefulness of the two women, but each guy could have put an end to it by getting up and walking out. Simple as that. Did the trans women play psychological hardball and the element of surprise? For sure, but not rape. I prosecuted rape cases for a decade. I wouldn’t’t have touched this case.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 month ago

I mean the fact that he said he wanted to stop means it was rape. Truth hurts sorry

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