by dave110256
Good story, I enjoyed the read. Would like to read more if you'd like to continue the story more.
I would love to read more of these adventures. Jake and maybe some of the other men's experiences. Thanks
I liked it very much and would like to read more chapters if you decide to write them. Thank you for sharing your story.
Waiting for the other shoe to fall. It is to perfect in every life there must be some rain.
Life can't stay that wonderful forever, sooner or later the women are going to resent how the men are so pampered and never have to do anything (much like in our world!). That said, I did give you five stars. Brilliant and original!
Love the story, can't wait for more. Maybe if the women have some shape shifting abilities would be interesting
a veritable male utopia. Lovely story well deserved of 5*****
Great story!
The problem with it is that English is NOT your natural language and, like most people, you used a spell-checker to correct your final submission.
This quote from your story "Astasia was much shorter then the rest, actually a little shorter then me" is only one of many examples.
The word then always relates to difference in time eg 'I did this then I did that'
The word than always relates to difference in conditions - as above!
Cheers
One of the old Twilight Zone productions was titled "How to Serve Man".......
Turned out to be the title of a cookbook.....
We only have her word that they are just like humans.
I remember a cheesy SF movie a long time ago; can't recall the name though. They "rescued" a blonde woman from a planet. On the trip back, people started dying and/or disappearing. The blonde was killing and eating the crew. They discovered it too late, and even though the blonde was killed, so was the crew. Ship was filled with her eggs. When the ship landed, the movie ended with ground crews taking more than a dozen blondes from the space ship on stretchers.
Just saying.
I really enjoyed it, while it lasted, and would like to read more.
i've been reading erotic stories all week. this is exactly what i was looking for. the best.
i wish i was jake, except i want to be the only man the planet! hehehe
ing. Submissive punk who happily went along with his captors just to have sex. He's their bitch. Couldn't finish the first page and stay awake. Was it discussed what would happen if he refused sex with the creepy aliens?
was covered better in "A Boy and His Dog" https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/A_Boy_and_His_Dog_(1975_film)
There wouldn't be sex involved. They would milk him for semen they way cows are used for milk.
If you're looking for a story with a connection to reality this is not for you. However, if you're looking for a one-off fanciful respite, this just might be it.
Snappin' milkin' pussy sounds fun..., for a while. The author(s) obviously had seen some of those (non-erotic) videos of women with very long tongues; ones that make me shiver. Having one a foot long wrap around my dick sounds fun for a bit. Prehensile tits that require no hands for a titfuck is just too weird.
I wonder if the author read Andre Norton's 'Virgin Planet'? One man on a planet of women but no sex (yet).