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Kennywood Picnic

byBobCollier©
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by Anonymous

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by Anonymous08/21/12

just a

sick fuck is all this author is.

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by Anonymous08/21/12

You probably watch too many gangbang vids

but still, i kinda liked it.

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by Lickideesplit08/21/12

Hot, but unrealistic

A man who loves wooden roller-coasters is NOT going to wimp out on the Black Widow! (that is NOT the only unrealistic part!). The author provides NO rationale for Sweetie to have been interested in pre-Hubby after the first BJ established his Teeny Weinie status ... Not rich or interesting, the Little Wand is not Magic and clearly, he is not very smart ... So WHY?
The story has a big problem at the finish ... Is Hubby is going to accept that Sweetie resumes her bigcock mega-slut history (or, more likely, CONTINUE with it in their home area - something he had not previously suspected or discovered) OR just drop her off at John's station on HIS way home to meet with his lawyer! Pity he didn't think to snap some pictures at the van (not too smart, remember?)
3*

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by Anonymous08/21/12

Gay

There should be an area for Gay married stories.

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by Anonymous08/21/12

Wow what dickless wonder you are. You deserve every creampie and every humiliation you get. Only fucked up turds like you would get off on this shit. Just another castrated willing cuckold your whore saw you coming when she first met you and she knew that you would be a better meal ticket than anything else around that's all you are to your whore nothing else.

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by cueball96108/21/12

Yuck!

Can you say HIV boys and girls? I understand the whole " different strokes for different folks" idea, but a marriage like this would seem like utter Hell to me for both parties involved. I mean you've got deception, betrayal, and I've already mentioned the STD crap shoot this guy is taking.
I take exception to that last paragraph as well. The details of the story plainly told us that she slept with this man before they married. It should have been obvious that he would not have been able to fulfill her needs. There is no challenge to love here at all. There is no love. There is only a spineless little man married to a whore who could not possibly give a damn about him.

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by Huedogg208/21/12

what's was hot about this crap

I just don't get why so many fucking writers think this is fucking sexy. Watching your wife get gangbanged is about as sexy as getting your nuts smashed with a hammer. So in the scheme of things it's just another WACC story.

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by Anonymous08/21/12

Jeeze

What a pile of dog shit this is, this so called auther should just shoot himself, no one would care, not even him.

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by Anonymous08/21/12

crap

Awful story. Not sexy, not erotic, not anything. Even the Kennywood Park references couldn't save it ( and I've been going to Kennywood Park all my life). Great park, crap story.

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by Anonymous08/21/12

liked it!

plays well into my gangbang fantasies... this girl enjoyed!

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by Ducky708/22/12

Literotica needs to start a cockold category

this shit is not LW.

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by playboymaxim25108/22/12

Love theme parks!

Really liked this story. As a theme park enthusiast, this is the first story I have read involving a theme park (and a gangbang to boot) and I hope to find more. Many thanks!

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by Anonymous08/23/12

leave her there and she need not get off that ride, and he'd be done with her. honesty here, with himself and her count for something.

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by tazz31708/23/12

GOING ALONG TO GET ALONG

BUT BENDING OVER AND BEING A WIMPY CUCK IS OUT OF LINE, tk u mlj lv nv

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by sirhugs08/24/12

Do they work this out?

I hope the marriage isn't doomed.

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by Anonymous08/27/12

really kennywood?

Kennywood is a tiny park right outside of Pittsburgh where there is no tailgating or even drinking. Kind of a lame pathetic, not really erotic story

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by Anonymous09/06/12

A Kennywood porn story, eh???

Yoi!! Double Yoi!!! Triple Yoi!!! It's kinda like when those bungles beat the stillers by 2 points back in '88... unbelievable!!

Said in my worst Myron Cope (z"l) voice

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