sick fuck is all this author is.
but still, i kinda liked it.
How the fuck are we expected to believe a cockless wimp like this dipshit ever dated a girl in his life let alone got one, that doesn't have to wear a bad over her head, to marry him. This should be in sci-fi & fantasy because the idea that the two of them are married is pure fantasy.
A man who loves wooden roller-coasters is NOT going to wimp out on the Black Widow! (that is NOT the only unrealistic part!). The author provides NO rationale for Sweetie to have been interested in pre-Hubby after the first BJ established his Teeny Weinie status ... Not rich or interesting, the Little Wand is not Magic and clearly, he is not very smart ... So WHY?
The story has a big problem at the finish ... Is Hubby is going to accept that Sweetie resumes her bigcock mega-slut history (or, more likely, CONTINUE with it in their home area - something he had not previously suspected or discovered) OR just drop her off at John's station on HIS way home to meet with his lawyer! Pity he didn't think to snap some pictures at the van (not too smart, remember?)
There should be an area for Gay married stories.
Wow what dickless wonder you are. You deserve every creampie and every humiliation you get. Only fucked up turds like you would get off on this shit. Just another castrated willing cuckold your whore saw you coming when she first met you and she knew that you would be a better meal ticket than anything else around that's all you are to your whore nothing else.
Can you say HIV boys and girls? I understand the whole " different strokes for different folks" idea, but a marriage like this would seem like utter Hell to me for both parties involved. I mean you've got deception, betrayal, and I've already mentioned the STD crap shoot this guy is taking.
I take exception to that last paragraph as well. The details of the story plainly told us that she slept with this man before they married. It should have been obvious that he would not have been able to fulfill her needs. There is no challenge to love here at all. There is no love. There is only a spineless little man married to a whore who could not possibly give a damn about him.
I just don't get why so many fucking writers think this is fucking sexy. Watching your wife get gangbanged is about as sexy as getting your nuts smashed with a hammer. So in the scheme of things it's just another WACC story.
What a pile of dog shit this is, this so called auther should just shoot himself, no one would care, not even him.
Awful story. Not sexy, not erotic, not anything. Even the Kennywood Park references couldn't save it ( and I've been going to Kennywood Park all my life). Great park, crap story.
plays well into my gangbang fantasies... this girl enjoyed!
this shit is not LW.
Really liked this story. As a theme park enthusiast, this is the first story I have read involving a theme park (and a gangbang to boot) and I hope to find more. Many thanks!
leave her there and she need not get off that ride, and he'd be done with her. honesty here, with himself and her count for something.
BUT BENDING OVER AND BEING A WIMPY CUCK IS OUT OF LINE, tk u mlj lv nv
I hope the marriage isn't doomed.
Kennywood is a tiny park right outside of Pittsburgh where there is no tailgating or even drinking. Kind of a lame pathetic, not really erotic story
Yoi!! Double Yoi!!! Triple Yoi!!! It's kinda like when those bungles beat the stillers by 2 points back in '88... unbelievable!!
Said in my worst Myron Cope (z"l) voice
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