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Unexpected Hall Pass

byInkent©
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by Anonymous

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by deadone08/24/12

Where to start

Nice to see only other men get her exited
Hubby is is only good for slimy thirds
She is proud to be a slut
Could careless about hubby
How often will she now demand a pass

Will she set up a drop dead beautiful girl for hubby?
(Hall pass does not work the other way, gutter sluts can always find dick, men can not always find a willing beautiful woman)

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by Anonymous08/24/12

Another Brtit Cuckold Story

Wow! What a surprise. Sad really Boring Same old same old Formuliac cuck tripe

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by Britease08/24/12

Really good

Great writing and atmosphere. I enjoyed it a lot.

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by Greyhair6108/24/12

Well done.

Nice pacing, caring characters, everyone consensual. Good stuff here.

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by Justtoold08/24/12

good

Hot story and very well written.I hope this isn't your only story. This ones ending left it open for maybe a few more episodes and I would like to read more about this couple.

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by Anonymous08/24/12

for the life of me

i don't why they have not set a genre for this type of story it would take away all the insults that are flung back and forth, i for one puke when i read this type of story and it's not my cup of tea, my guess is they want the insults to continue.

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by Anonymous08/24/12

Cuck

wtf can't you limey write non cuckmaker tales you are beginning to devolve into Indian writers cuckold molder.

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by Danno_6145508/24/12

A GOOD STORY BUT SOME HOW LACKING

I liked the idea and the flow. Need to re-check spelling and word selection in a few places. Keep at it!

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by Lickideesplit08/24/12

Time management

Hubby was a meanie! Two hours is barely enough when you're married and you've both brushed your teeth and it is clear that sex is on the docket! At least start the clock when the (prospective) Bull opens the door to 106!
I found the 'fits and starts' of their getting acquainted very disconcerting! Between Bull being in recovery mode from separation, and Sweetie being tentative with this unexpected boon, it progressed oddly, IMHO!
4*

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by 08/24/12

good concept

The plot is good, and the buildup excellent, but was distracted by the various spelling and grammatical errors. Your description of her internal feelings were excellent, and probably represents many a woman's fantasy regarding sex with a stranger.

And remember guys, this is a FANTASY. Chill a little.

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by Anonymous08/24/12

WTF? A MAN, a HUSBAND? GIVES away his wife to a TOTAL stranger to do as he will? In real life she could have been murdered or raped or though it's hard to rape the willing. WTF is wrong with this picture? Only a very sick mind would come up with this story and even more sick are the ones that will get off on this shit. And of course there will be those that love this idea of giving away what should be the precious thing in the world. This asshole husband simply tells the wife to go get fucked and she does and then she comes back and gives him sloppy seconds. And people find this story EROTIC? it reads like every normal husbands nightmare and every willing pathetic cucks wet dream. I guess we all know what the writer is.

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by Anonymous08/24/12

oh how dumb

I made the same mistake once when I was young and what did the dumb cow do with it ? she fucked also the guy without a condom eventhough I said no problem as long as you protect yourself and with that me too. I stayed consequent and did not touch her for 3 month until she could prove clean health bill. since then I have a zero tolerance rules. women are just to dumb and can't handle liberty when give. why I acted so hard you ask ? she made an academic degree inlusiv a dr. title before she got 25 years old. so if an intelligent woman can't handle it, what will a dumb do.

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by Anonymous08/24/12

According to Clinton, she didn't cheat

The guy licks finger fucks her, and she sucks his dick (but stops before he cums). Looks like her husband was dead smart with that time limit: she returns to him unfucked and hot to trot. I pity the guy back in 106, nursing his blue balls.

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by Rossini1208/24/12

It is nt real, guys!

I gave it a 5, because of the concept and most of the descriptions, but, please, when will the authors here learn to write correctly, sans spelling and grammatical errors... there wre at least 30 of them in this work; most are just silly, careless errors. All that is required is to proof-read before submitting the story.
As to some of the comments, it is just a STORY... fiction & fantasy - if you do not like the topic, why are you reading erotica? Have a nice day all.

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by Anonymous08/24/12

A two hour hall pass?? Brilliant imagination and super hot fun!!

I'm going to try this fantasy with my darling cuddly loving hubby tonight.

Thank you! 5*

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by Anonymous08/25/12

Whilst

Another in a long line of limey cucks.

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by Anonymous08/25/12

rubbish

pathetic, truly

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by sirhugs08/25/12

More detail in part two?

well written, smutty but would like more graphic sex please

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by Anonymous08/25/12

Editor

You really need an editor as there are numerous errors. Using spell check would also help.

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by Anonymous08/27/12

Not bad

While there were mistakes, the author used an inner voice for the female often missing in the typical hot wife story

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by Anonymous09/01/12

Awesome

This was such a sexy and romantic story. I also gave my loving wife a Hall Pass but she has not used yet, the right man hasn't come along.

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by Duna09/01/12

Answer

@Rossini12 Because here and on the SOL (storiesonline.net) the fans could read only revenge, consequence and (good reconcilation) stories. Some stories I read on ASSTR as well. Would you like to become a Censor to cut out from the collection the revenge stories from the last decad????????

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by betrayedbylove09/16/12

Bullshit

Fantasy bullshit from a wannabe slut. Could ch. 2 improve this shit? We'll see...

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by Anonymous09/16/12

1*

A willing cuck and cuckqueen story. When will this site wake up and realise that willing cuckoldry stories and cuckqueen stories are not stories about 'Loving wives'. Come on webmasters wake up.

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