Stars, Sulfur, and the Taste of Ash

Very Nice

I like the twist and turns you add. Your submissions are
always a good read. Thanks for you stories!!

Beautiful !!

A beautiful story line and beautifully written.
Wish I could give it more than 5 stars along with my best wishes for success in the contest.

Loved the fire works orgasm :-)

Really great writing
lovely scenario
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FAVORITE

I think this might just be my favorite story of yours. I’ve loved all of your stories, although I tend to favor the harder ones, but this was just beautiful. The descriptive imagery really put me right there in the story, I could actually see and smell and feel what the characters were experiencing. Well Done!!

mmmm

I hope there is more to this great story!!

Poetic

I love the imagery in this story, the way the characters are surrounded by evocatively rendered emotions and physical detail. You have a lovely way with words. There's a tender vibe here that's caring and beautiful. Thanks for the read! :)

omg

That was wonderful and amazing and..and...omg. *flail*

You are an expert at expressing emotions and pulling your reader along. That was some sexy story.

slow, sweet and scorching sex! yum,

Stereotypes

I am a fan of your work in general, and I especially liked this one. One of my favorite things about your work is that you mess with stereotypes and assumptions. Like in this story where Jake mentioned that people assume that he's a top because of his size. I really like gay stories where the characters either switch back and forth or the roles are unexpected based on their physical or initial character descriptions. You always make the emotions and characters believable (in everything I have read so far. Still working on finishing all your amazing stories). With this story I particularly liked how the artsy description aspect with the fireworks wove into the story and the sex scene in such a way that I could appreciate both, and they also added to each other. This story made me so happy, and now I want to know what happens to these characters next!

This was so effing hot. I was on here for a while, reading all the "editors pick" and top stuff. They did NOTHING compared to this. amazing.