Very descriptive and erotic. Loved the part where he made you squirt! Although he talks like a romance novel, a little. Keep it up, thanks for posting.
I loved this completely it was very well told with the right amount of detail keep it up.
I wasn't really sure how well I would do since this is for the Summer Love contest and my first time submitting.
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Well done, darkness
Very descriptive and erotic. Loved the part where he made you squirt! Although he talks like a romance novel, a little.
Keep it up, thanks for posting.
excellent
I loved this completely it was very well told with the right amount of detail keep it up.
Thank you!
I wasn't really sure how well I would do since this is for the Summer Love contest and my first time submitting.
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