All Comments on 'Wonderland Ch. 04'

For gods sake man - please keep your title the same for you ONGOING story the only to figure out which order to red them in is to check the date at the end.

Its not like you've written four different things - not that that makes a difference .

Why not pick a title then number it with the sub heading of your choice.

Here just in case you cant figure it all out - your story labeled so people can follow it easier.

Wonderland : 1 - Mom Through the Looking Glass

Wonderland : 2 - Stepping Through the Looking Glass

Wonderland : 3 - In with Their Heads

Wonderland : 4 - Stevie Travels to Wonderland

That makes sense to me - the main title is up to you - its a great story - why fuck it up my not numbering and titling better?

All your stuff in This story sits together on searches and in the index.

But hey If you want to make life tricky I guess its up to you...

Am I wrong?

STEVE NEEDS TO EXPLORE ALL ASPECTS OF HOT FAMILY ACTION..INCLUDING HOT DAD/SON ACTION WITH MOM DIRECTING AND PARTICIPATING..NOTHING HOTTER FOR..ALWAYS WET AND DRIPPING.. WOMEN/MOMS LIKE MYSELF THAN THAT FAMILY ACTION. ESPECIALLY WHEN DIFFERENT GENERATIONS ARE INCLUDED..LIKE DAN AND GRANDDAD IN YOUR NEXT CHAPTER...IGNORE ANY CRITICS..THEY DON'T KNOW WHAT THEY ARE MISSING.. AND TELL US IN GRAPHIC HOT DIALOGUE ABOUT THIS ASPECT OF HOT FAMILY LOVING..

a quick read but a good one. ready for more. thanks.

I go along with him having sex with his father as well. Great story

Fucking sucking hot more and more and soon. Cunt lapper Lanc's uk

the story speaks for itself.