All Comments on '"Fifty Shades of Grey" Encounter'

I would like to see more action with the hygienist or with other women who have read the book and are willing to act out their fantasies. Also more details and length to the story please

...is some of the worst-written pornography to hit the shelves.

for what it's worth, your could do with some proof-reading (e.g. your vs you're, breasts were vs breast were), but an interesting idea.

This was a very sexy read, and I hope that there will be a second encounter in six months at the next appointment....I really hope my hygenist read this before my next appointment, shes so hot...

As for the other comments, who needs to be that shallow !!! Keep writing and many thanks!

Wish i was your hygienist *wink wink*

The story was fit as fuck other then the rape references - massive turn off