As a gentleman who enjoys a nice hand job, I found my physical reaction to this chapter to be almost sweet agony. Oh, how I wanted this character's hand on my penis! Your writing style really pulls this reader into your narratives, lending an extra dose of realism. I like the sense of innocence despite the graphic nature of the prose, and I like the ebb and flow that builds to a climax. Tantalizing chapter. Once again, well done.
From start to finish you injected an aire of erotic anticipation. The way you described each step was definitely arousing to say the least. Your description of what was happening to him made me wish she was doing it to me. I can definitely see them doing more and spending more time together. You have a great story, continue on with it.
Your words are like food to the perpetually hungry :)
pg, good soul that he is, will see how once again I am drawn to continue a story that was originally intended to have only three (not four) parts.
It's my own fault for the way I ended chapter 3, I'll admit. I left the very clear idea that there was something else, uhm ... coming.
I'm not dead-set against writing more chapters with these characters, but I think it would have to follow the idea of photography to be properly placed here; otherwise, it would just turn into more explorations of what acts the brother and sister would allow themselves to get into.
Anyone who has followed me through this little thing and the Double or Nothing story knows that I'm all about exploring the reluctance to plunge right into incestuous sex. I think that this very reluctance is what makes this genre interesting and realistic. And as much as I love to tease my poor readers, I hold at least some degree of realism as an important aim in my stories.
I don't mean to go on and on about this, but I think it's important and fair to my characters to say that I enjoy exploring the limits of erotic nudity among family members while at the same time playing upon the tensions of the very real taboo of going too far.
So, "AUTHOR'S NOTE," if you will. If you're expecting my heroines to willingly accept being penetrated vaginally (or otherwise) by their family men, then I'm not your girl.
But if you enjoy testing where, exactly, the limit between movie-night-in-pajamas (and maybe just a little something more) might happen to be, well, that's where I'm going. And you're welcome to come along with me :)
I believe Chapter 4 is a fine place to end the photo shoot. Sure seemed like a climax to me. Now, movie night in pajamas has me intrigued. Lead on, and I'll follow. I think we're like-minded on the subject of incest. It seems absolutely plausible that exploration can and will take place -- and be enjoyed. But I like the fact that a line can be drawn -- and not be crossed. Thanks again for your prose, Brandie69. Certainly glad I found it.
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Anonymous08/28/12
Great story
I think this story definitely feels concluded, but I do hope you do more with the characters. They're well-developed and offer much more potential, especially with the mom already catching one naked. An immediate follow-up could involve developing the photos/relationship...just a thought. Great work! I love the tease :)
PS: I'd gladly come along with you (great choice of words)!
Well, pg, as I have said elsewhere (maybe in private, I don't quite remember)
I won't submit a story that doesn't make me respond the way it is intended to make my readers respond. In that sense, and I suppose it's one of the little thrills of having a story actually go public here, I get to share a sensation with maybe hundreds, or thousands, of readers.
Brandie you've earned another 5 star rating from me for this wonderful adventurous chapter. I've really enjoyed your story.
You've said in some of your responses that you like to explore - so may I suggest a photo session in the great outdoors in a park or a trail where there are always possibilities of being.......
It's funny you should say that. I just submitted my entry in the summer contest and, while there isn't any photography in it, the themes are a lot like what you suggest.
It should be up on the site within about 72 hours.
On re-reading, there actually is photography in my summer contest submission. It was one quick little passing mention (of a true event, by the way), and I had forgotten all about it.
God you had me so hard and when I came it was incredible.. You are an amazing writer and very arousing. I lookforward to reading some of your other texts
Excellent yarn. I came home from work one night to find my g/f reading it with her hand inside her navy blue cotton panties, wanking like there was no tomorrow.
After she'd made herself cum, she went and put on the school uniform she wears for me from time to time, bottle green gymslip, yellow blouse and white knee-hi socks and we spent the rest of the evening with my cock inside the ribbed leg of her bottle green cotton school knickers.
Your feelings about the range of things you have your family members do is acceptable ( yeah sounds so snooty and priggish) but probably a bit more realistic.. You have a very sensual teasing style of story telling and I do appreciate your stories. I voted before but did not comment so I am doing that now. Hope to read more from you. Thank you
English
Wonderful
As a gentleman who enjoys a nice hand job, I found my physical reaction to this chapter to be almost sweet agony. Oh, how I wanted this character's hand on my penis! Your writing style really pulls this reader into your narratives, lending an extra dose of realism. I like the sense of innocence despite the graphic nature of the prose, and I like the ebb and flow that builds to a climax. Tantalizing chapter. Once again, well done.
Super
From start to finish you injected an aire of erotic anticipation. The way you described each step was definitely arousing to say the least. Your description of what was happening to him made me wish she was doing it to me. I can definitely see them doing more and spending more time together. You have a great story, continue on with it.
Thank you, kind gentlemen
Your words are like food to the perpetually hungry :)
pg, good soul that he is, will see how once again I am drawn to continue a story that was originally intended to have only three (not four) parts.
It's my own fault for the way I ended chapter 3, I'll admit. I left the very clear idea that there was something else, uhm ... coming.
I'm not dead-set against writing more chapters with these characters, but I think it would have to follow the idea of photography to be properly placed here; otherwise, it would just turn into more explorations of what acts the brother and sister would allow themselves to get into.
Anyone who has followed me through this little thing and the Double or Nothing story knows that I'm all about exploring the reluctance to plunge right into incestuous sex. I think that this very reluctance is what makes this genre interesting and realistic. And as much as I love to tease my poor readers, I hold at least some degree of realism as an important aim in my stories.
I don't mean to go on and on about this, but I think it's important and fair to my characters to say that I enjoy exploring the limits of erotic nudity among family members while at the same time playing upon the tensions of the very real taboo of going too far.
So, "AUTHOR'S NOTE," if you will. If you're expecting my heroines to willingly accept being penetrated vaginally (or otherwise) by their family men, then I'm not your girl.
But if you enjoy testing where, exactly, the limit between movie-night-in-pajamas (and maybe just a little something more) might happen to be, well, that's where I'm going. And you're welcome to come along with me :)
B
I'll be there
I believe Chapter 4 is a fine place to end the photo shoot. Sure seemed like a climax to me. Now, movie night in pajamas has me intrigued. Lead on, and I'll follow. I think we're like-minded on the subject of incest. It seems absolutely plausible that exploration can and will take place -- and be enjoyed. But I like the fact that a line can be drawn -- and not be crossed. Thanks again for your prose, Brandie69. Certainly glad I found it.
Great story
I think this story definitely feels concluded, but I do hope you do more with the characters. They're well-developed and offer much more potential, especially with the mom already catching one naked. An immediate follow-up could involve developing the photos/relationship...just a thought. Great work! I love the tease :)
PS: I'd gladly come along with you (great choice of words)!
Come along with me
Oops, did I say that? ;)
B
dynamite
always it is you who keep me hooked to this site
You did say that!
If writing your prose affects you as much physically as my reading it does, then I suspect "come along with me" is exceedingly apt.
Well, pg, as I have said elsewhere (maybe in private, I don't quite remember)
I won't submit a story that doesn't make me respond the way it is intended to make my readers respond. In that sense, and I suppose it's one of the little thrills of having a story actually go public here, I get to share a sensation with maybe hundreds, or thousands, of readers.
Here's to that (shared) response, no?
B
Agreed
Here's to that shared response, yes!
Another EXCELLENT Chapter
Brandie you've earned another 5 star rating from me for this wonderful adventurous chapter. I've really enjoyed your story.
You've said in some of your responses that you like to explore - so may I suggest a photo session in the great outdoors in a park or a trail where there are always possibilities of being.......
RecHiker
Thanks, Hiker!
Always nice to see your handle ;)
It's funny you should say that. I just submitted my entry in the summer contest and, while there isn't any photography in it, the themes are a lot like what you suggest.
It should be up on the site within about 72 hours.
B
Correction, to Hiker
On re-reading, there actually is photography in my summer contest submission. It was one quick little passing mention (of a true event, by the way), and I had forgotten all about it.
B (full-disclosurely)
so hard
God you had me so hard and when I came it was incredible.. You are an amazing writer and very arousing. I lookforward to reading some of your other texts
Awesome!
I had read Chapter 1 when it first came out, but I wasn't aware until just now that there were three more new chapters. I enjoyed all 4 chapters.
Very nice pacing of increasing the heat with each chapter.
Loved the sticky, messy ending! YES!
Can't wait for the next chapter.
Rubbish
Biggest load of rubbish I have ever read
Yes, Mr. Anymouse
It was a pretty big load.
;)
B
I love the buildup
I've looked forward to each additional segment. Keep up the good work. I am going to read all of your stories.
Many Thanks Brandie69
Excellent yarn. I came home from work one night to find my g/f reading it with her hand inside her navy blue cotton panties, wanking like there was no tomorrow.
After she'd made herself cum, she went and put on the school uniform she wears for me from time to time, bottle green gymslip, yellow blouse and white knee-hi socks and we spent the rest of the evening with my cock inside the ribbed leg of her bottle green cotton school knickers.
Thanks Anonymous and scotty!
It's nice to hear from you. :)
B
Amazing read
Extremely Hott story Brandy. You have me hard as a rock!
Stephen
Thank you, Stephen!
I'm glad you enjoyed it :)
B
Still a wonderful story
Your feelings about the range of things you have your family members do is acceptable ( yeah sounds so snooty and priggish) but probably a bit more realistic.. You have a very sensual teasing style of story telling and I do appreciate your stories. I voted before but did not comment so I am doing that now. Hope to read more from you. Thank you
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