All Comments on 'One Spring Day Ch. 01'

Great story keep it up!

I like that each story feels different despite a similar formula. The mind control always takes a different form so it's exciting to see how each different character handles what happens to them.

All that can be said (most sincerely) is... "wow."

This story sux,you give no details to what the woman controling her looks like and no reason why this woman is abusing and raping her. you need much much more details and back story,so far this is just a story of how a woman gets raped for no reason TERRIBLE STORY SO FAR!!!

Enjoying this so far, it moved a ltiile fast, and it could use move details, but I hope it will get better as I follow it

Sorry not for me.