All Comments on 'Summer Heat'

A little rushed, but nicely done and with some humor along with the dialog.

Once again you write one that is hot and draws the reader in. Different from your norm but very good.

two please, and grandma

is a hoot and then some, i story involving her finding a guy would be pretty interesting

I totally enjoyed reading every word and couldn't wait to read the next all the way through! My only problem is it ended! haha guess every story has to have some kind of ending... hehehe... I love a good heartfelt story, but I also love a good comical heartfelt and this one was definately comical! Keep writing!

Please add more chapters!!!! It's soooo good so far :)

My very first Mistress Lynn story. I liked it! I was impressed how you wove my river into the story, but those shoes should have been stilettos. ;) Her grandmother should have known that.

The dialog was very realistic.

Good luck in the contest.

Loved where you went with this story, it was both hot and sweet, not the usual, much better. Thanks for a great read.

But just way too short. You left me feeling as if it should have another chapter just as long, as if this was just the introduction.

Sorry I didn't read this in time for the contest voting. Very enjoyable read. I agree with other commentors that we need another chapter.

What a nice little story. Can we now have a part 2 please?

One can always learn from a Mistress of her craft.

HP

Nice story... What about part 2?

;-)

I do enjoy your delicate touch, in all your stories I have read to date, They all deserve the 5* I gave them.

Another demonstration of how to write well.

Thank you

HP