by CamillaHumby
was torn between a 4 and 5, you got a 5. i like where it goes, it would have been nicer if it didn't take that long, i.e. a little more edit, little more punching up
Was convinced no one deserved a 5 . . . til I read it (& I'm a lit major).
every good creation leaves an impression, it's the conclusion that matters most, and indeed, here it was awesome.