Hijacked

Great story

am voting 5*****. Could do with a spell checker and a few more commas. But It was an excellent read. I look forward to more of this.

Hey, thanks for the feedback! I've been criticised in the past for using too many commas so it would seem I've swung too far back the other way - I'll see if I can't find a balance. And I thought I had ran a spellcheck if I'm honest, went back through there though and actually cringed and how many I had overlooked! Submitted an edit for that, hopefully it helps.