by ohsowomanly
Great start to the story. I can't wait to see how it unfolds!
Great start. You clearly gave us an excellent story. You grabbed my attention and held it throughout the story. As a 40 year old woman, who had her Lesbian experience 3 years ago, it spoke to me. I'm anxiously awaiting Chapter 2 This has the potential to be a great series. Thanks for sharing your talent with us.
let's see what comes next, so far a good foundation has been settled...
Love the way you have sowed the seeds. I'm looking forward to reading more.
Great start, I love the way you describe the relationship between the two women. Please expand on it in the hopefully coming chapters. The characters have much to tell us and I await their stories.
Are you sure the story isn't set in the UK? There's no manors here in Australia!