All Comments on 'Clara and Jennifer Ch. 01'

by ohsowomanly

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AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
Please continue

Great start to the story. I can't wait to see how it unfolds!

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
THANKS GREAT START

Great start. You clearly gave us an excellent story. You grabbed my attention and held it throughout the story. As a 40 year old woman, who had her Lesbian experience 3 years ago, it spoke to me. I'm anxiously awaiting Chapter 2 This has the potential to be a great series. Thanks for sharing your talent with us.

elle_9549elle_9549over 11 years ago

More please. :) ~ L

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
Very promising start

let's see what comes next, so far a good foundation has been settled...

wordsmith74wordsmith74over 11 years ago
a slow lingering start, sounds like it will biuld to a great story

Love the way you have sowed the seeds. I'm looking forward to reading more.

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
Great Start

Great start, I love the way you describe the relationship between the two women. Please expand on it in the hopefully coming chapters. The characters have much to tell us and I await their stories.

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
Carlton Manor"???

Are you sure the story isn't set in the UK? There's no manors here in Australia!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
go on then......

ive us some more

seetheartinmeseetheartinmealmost 8 years ago

More please! Dying to know what happens next!

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