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by Privates1stClass09/05/12

Memories

It's amazing some of the details we remember about our first time--it was a Tuesday, and hot, but you didn't care. The crickets in the grass--the clear water bubbling over rocks in the creek--and her pussy--you'll never forget that, either. And it didn't last--it was over much too soon.

Short and sweet; it does bring back memories of my first time, too.

Good luck on the contest.

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by Anonymous09/11/12

A brief account of what could probably be a true story

I could write one but Literotica would never print it. I was 12 and he was 14. We met at school, hid in the male toilet to make out and we were so hot for each other. He practically raped me behind a pile of green foam mattresses in the gym at school. It was quick and excruciatingly painful and I bled for days. Like the author, I also remember the day but that's kind of very personal.

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by MusicianElf09/21/12

Fiction

Thank you for your comments. I just want to remind you of the definition of "fiction." There is such a place near Alexandria Ohio in the real world, and in 1976 there was a McDonald's on Mount Vernon Avenue, Horn's Hill Park is a real place, and I was indeed a math tutor at OSU Newark Branch at this time, but otherwise, this is a work of fiction, and all characters come out of my twisted imagination.

Thanks to everyone who enjoyed the story and voted for it.

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