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John Bows Down to His Mother in Law

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by Anonymous

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by Baloney_Pony09/09/12

Do you have any idea how annoying it is to read a story where speech isn't in quotation marks or even punctuated he asked.

Get with it he said.

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by Anonymous09/09/12

What a pathetic, sad, excuse for a man.

Loser all the way.

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by Anonymous09/09/12

A very difficult read

I give you credit for the story line but you really need to use an editor. This was a very difficult read and I only made it through the first few paragraphs.

Good luck.

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by pg24009/09/12

Needs word

I made it to "just once seen her boobs" and had to stop.

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by Anonymous09/09/12

Editors reed you storee end fix et four ewe...

an editor wood reel-e hlep mayk yer store-e more gooder & stuff - thimk abowdit serially

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by Boobworship09/10/12

Good One

Loved the build up to the climax

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by Anonymous09/12/12

boo

The grammar sucks.

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by Anonymous09/12/12

NOT INCEST!!!

Awful - as per other comments, but THIS IS NOT INCEST!

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by Anonymous09/13/12

Suggestion

Son-in-law and Mother-in-law is certainly not Incest. Suggest that daughter and mother is lesbian incest. Build up part 2 as ménage-de-trois and let MIL teach.

Good Story. Good Sex loved the build up to sex between Son IL and Mo IL

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by Anonymous10/06/12

Hey John

Hope I had a sexy MIL like yours. She is in her early 40's and someday I will have to push my ball into her court

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by Anonymous10/10/12

Mother in Law

Sexy young MIL is always fuckable suckable kissable lickable. Loved the fuck. Alas my MIL is 60 plus but trust me she has all the ables.

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by Anonymous11/18/12

Seduction

It looks like you seduced your MIL and not the opposite. Loved it. Continue

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