by Nervade
Really enjoyed this. Let's see if he can take her home with him.
Liked how the author added in some humor to spice up an otherwise so-so story. It made the story much more interesting. I was hoping Sir Swoonmore liked it doggy style after the blow job and took the Princess up on her offer; maybe next time.
One problem, brass does not rust, it corrodes but it doesn't rust. That's why the Navy, fire departments, etc use so much brass. Not a big deal and easy to overlook and just enjoy the story.
Loved it. Could use a bit of editing, but the errors don't detract much from the story. It's still understandable.
Raunchy and funny, this was a superb story, i only hope you continue to write on it.
i love a good busty blowjob story. especially when the finish is in her mouth after such a detailed description! Necessary payoff.
Dude you have to do a second part. They totally need to be in love and continue fucking. It's so hot and an odd couple. I want more!
Fucking love goblins! Such a sexy goblin princess! Would give her all my cum too!