All Comments on 'Susan and Edward – The Beginning'

For the read.

Although it felt as if the ending was somewhat rushed - as if there was actually more to tell but you'd decided to leave it at that?

I know you've got to leave something in order for the next chapter to merge seamlessly with, but this felt a little rushed. The gradual build up throughout the story was good, it promises to be a hot tale of wife watching, I hope it is! A little more care in the format wouldn't go amiss though!

Is he merely hoping Susan becomes more of an exhibitionist, or is there something else brewing at the back of his mind?

bunch of crap.

No cheating, no cuckolding, no gangbangs what is going on here? is this story in the right category? this the loving category isn't it? Oh wait there will be a part two and normal service will be resumed.

The debate? Whether or not to rate this chapter, or wait and see how subsequent submissions read? As I was reviewing this segment, I found myself thinking like DWartnuts! That was so scary, I figured any author who could do that deserved at least one point less than I would normally give, so...

2* ...

right now! Good news ... it has a lot of room to go up in later chapters!

A vacation at the right time and place can rekindle relationship. Very realistic, hope the change continues.

It felt like this was the beginning of the Beginning. I get it, she took her top off. Thay had passionate relations, but the impersonal outside perspective made it feel a little mundane. It feels like the readers are seeing this tale the way Edward felt at the beginning, like the passion is missing...

BOOOORRRRING

just go with the flow, TK U MLJ LV NV

I love this story because my name is Susan and I wish I could get the courage to do that

Not very sexy story.

It's nice to read about a couple, who have been married for a long time and for them to find a way to bring excitement back to their sex life without involving other people.

After all, it's a lot of work to keep the love and sexual spark alive in a relationship when being married to the same person for a long time.

Thanks for the read.

Looking forward to part 2

My wife and I were in the same situation until we started vacationing on the French side of St Martin. Each year her bottoms got smaller and smaller.

It really is a great sensation to see your wife adding quality to the scenery ...... I love it when my wife strips off with such a casual air and the way men just oogle at her tits...... We frequently go naked now which is also a fabulous experience and very much recommended. Good luck

This brings back fond memories of our first trip to St. Martin. Took several days to coax my wife into going topless but each following trip got better. She never shed her bottom but the got smaller and smaller on each trip.

Ever notice that negative comments are mostly posted from Anonymous? Props to those few who do use their true account name.

Anyway, I realized it was rather tame, but it was a first entry and you were just getting your feet wet. I also see that your ratings were much better in later postings (I am about to check those out). Glad to see you didn't let the negativity stop you from going on.

This is a great introduction to the story. I can see many similarities to,our own experiences in the Med.

nicely written and one feels it is a true account not just a fantasy.

Looking forward to see how far Susan will go next.

V dull. Is this what passes for excitement for some.

As a 60yr old English man wife and I have been sunbathing naked since we met 40 years ago. It's just normal.

Just a thought, This is really a summary of AN UNMASTERED WIFE'S REAWAKENING. Why not instead list all the stories in the order that they occurred? It would make your series of stories one continuous read.

Not bad so far, but it probably won’t last.